Reviews for FIRE ICE
JacksBlade chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Well since I'm the first to review I'd just like to say you did a really good job on starting the story off and I hope you continue adding at least a few more chapters (I feel like it ended on a bit of a cliffhanger). You have a very nice plot going and I also like the details you put in it. Great job and please keep going!