Reviews for The Fanfix
Marching Madly Onward chapter 2 . 12/27/2004
This is what parodies should strive to be. Okay, so I may be exaggerating a little, but as a fellow fanfic writer, the references and in-jokes get me. Everything from Lord of the Rings to Final Fantasy 7 to All Your Base...I must say I'm impressed.

This is definitely going on my favorites list.
technetium chapter 5 . 12/2/2003
""Fascinating," said Agent Nimoy." - loved that line.
technetium chapter 4 . 12/2/2003
I love Cats and the singing. And Yoda as the oracle was perfect.
technetium chapter 3 . 12/2/2003
Acupuncture - ha! I laughed at the parts with Cats - that's great!
technetium chapter 2 . 12/2/2003
I quite like this. Weird, but funny. I hope to see more of Agent Elrond soon. I love the Vogon references - Neo Morpheous should be thankful he only had to see a tatoo instead of hearing their poetry. Hehe - I liked the error message.
Yar Kramer chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Heh heh. Don't worry, you'll find out why Nebulus said that ... in The Fanfix: ReUploaded! (And, of course, the last one will be called The Fanfix: Revisions.)
Arabwel chapter 7 . 4/13/2003
This is one hell of a story... I enjoyed it! Too bad you didn't slip in a few barbs towards us slaashers, eh? And a few jokes about all the gratutious smut that's floating around...

But I do want to lodge a complaint: "Get yourself ... a better ... actor," wheezed Nebulus. NO WAY! His Hugoness is the greates axctor in existence! Never, never can be said that there could be a better actor!
TabusVakarian chapter 7 . 2/25/2003
ok, so I did get time to finish it. although I SHOULD have been doing my homework, but you had me hooked. I loved it. Definetly getting added to my favourites list. _
TabusVakarian chapter 3 . 2/25/2003
HAHAHAHAHA! Man this is funny. not sure if I'll get to finish the story tonight, so I'm reviewing now. This is the funniest matrix fic I've read yet! Keep up the good work!
TsukiNoBara chapter 6 . 2/10/2003
Well, that was interesting. Thank you for giving me something to do. Nice story. *goes to tell friends*

TsukiNoBara chapter 5 . 2/10/2003
*remembers something from the last chapter* Yes, yoou are a complete hitchhiker fan. You even know about the TV show. _ Pity they only did the first two books...

"Oh my god!" exclaimed Trilogy. "You killed Kenny! You bastard!"

_ I KNEW IT! _ Heck, I only watch the show to see Kenny die. _

"What makes you think that you've got a snowball's chance in hell to do it?"

"Because," said Neo Morpheus, "the Oracle says I'm not the One!"

o_O Okaaaaaay...

"Get yourself ... a better ... actor,"

_ hehehe

"Now I'll sing selections from Disney movies."

*screams* THE HORROR! *blinks* Well, it's better than Britney Spears.

"Somebody set up us the bomb," said Agent Shinra.

HA! _ All your base are belong to us!

'transformed into a huge, roaring monster rabbit Maverick'

o_O Okaaaay...

"Well, glad we got that plothole outta the way,"

_ So much fun to make fun of plot holes, isn't it?

'And Superman caught the helicopter! He changed his course and carried the helicopter safely to a rooftop.'

o_O That...was...different...

"Uh ... the old guy ... who's starting to glow blue ..."

...Yeah. That would make me feel comfortable. *end sarcasm*

"to protect the plot continuum within this fanfiction."

...You like the PPC? _ *suddenly gasps* Neo said they were making it worse...that must mean...OH MY GOD! THE AGENTS ARE MARY-SUES!

"My name ..." growled Neo Morpheus, "is Snidely Whiplash!"

o_O O_o That was...REALLY...unexpected...

"How about I give you the finger ... and you explode in a million fragments that scatter around the entire Internet?"

Always did like that quote...erm...the unedited one...but this was good, too!

"I actually agree with you. This is a godawful fanfic with a dumbass author. But you don't need to make yourself look even dumber."

*shakes head, amused* hehehe...Well, I'd only agree with you if you wrote a Mary-Sue. Otherwise, I think this is still pretty good.

TsukiNoBara chapter 2 . 2/9/2003
I skipped ahead to see who the cast was...

...Why do I have the feeling I'm later going to read either:

"OH MY GOD! They killed Kenny!"


"OH MY GOD! They killed Mouse!"



*smiles, looks down, and shakes head* Hitchhiker fan?



"I even know what you did last summer."

_ I STILL know what you did last summer. _

"Will it help if I hide in the cubicle across from me, then make a daring escape via the scaffolding outside to the rooftop?"

*simply stares, looking confused even though she isn't* Okay, that was unexpected...

"I hate it when these parodies don't hold true to the original,"

_ I liked that...

"Please do not press this button again."

Okay, you must be a hitchhiker fan.

"I imagine, right now, you must be feeling a bit like Arthur Dent, teleported up to the Vogon ship?"

Okay, You most certainly ARE Hitchhiker fan. _ I like Marvin and Agrajag. _

"Do you know - Wake up!"


"You can feel it when you save the world,"

o_O What the...*has the same reaction Neo does*

"You take the red link, and you stay on the galactic hitch-hike, and see just where this Vogon ship goes."

You know, I'm probably going to copy and paste every reference to hitchhiker. WONDERFUL series. Have you read all five books in the trilogy?

_ quite interesting.
TsukiNoBara chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
Now, before I begin, I would like to let you know that I open the review box before I begin reading the chapters. This is so I can review as I go along...and post things I tthought were amusing, interesting, or hilarious. OK? And now...MY REVIEW!

'Perhaps you've seen the University of Middle Earth.'

_ Sure have. I'm currently going there, too! _ *hugs her Mini-Balrog, Smeogol*


...I'm not sure if I want that to be Homer Simpson or not...

'Agent Elrond and Agent Shinra got out of the car.'

AGENT ELROND! *brings out her fellow Lord of the Rings humor fans who have actually read the book* _ Whenever I get to the point in FotR where Elrond says that men are weak, I can't help but say that...MEN ARE A VIRUS! _

"Yes. I read ahead."


interesting...*goes to read the next chapter*
ZephyrLemon chapter 2 . 1/16/2003
Oh man, this cracks me up! You should be proud to be one of the few successful writers of Matrix parodies. I love how you go from "Trilogy" (teehee) stealing lines from Buzz Lightyear to ripping Sonic The Hedgehog action sequences and then Nebulus: "Cowabungaaaa..." as the cell phone falls. Intelligent humor is what it's all about and you've got it. I would love to read the rest of this right now but other pressing matters call me away from my frivolous (if amusing) jaunts in fanfiction. I promise I'll finish reading this because it makes me laugh so! )

Squidgee Moot chapter 7 . 12/23/2002
Oh My God! I wish I had an idea like that. "The Fanfix" God it even sounds good! I'm currently working on a Lord of the Rings/ Matrix crossover. but your idea was better.

-The last wizard

P.s. I just can't wait for "The Fanfix Reloaded!"
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