|Reviews for Fifty Shades Shattered|
| NikkiG26 chapter 33 . 11/23
Enjoyed your story with all the twists and turns of your plot and enjoyed how Ana abd Christian grew together through trials and tribulations.
| Jenniferdevonsimon chapter 33 . 11/2
Awesome story line...
Once again I love your writing and ALL your stories
| marietjie.valentine chapter 33 . 10/13
Great story! Wiping away the tears right now...
| Fictionstar173 chapter 33 . 8/9
Amazing story I cried so many times. You truely are talented.
| lindabellcrandall chapter 6 . 7/11
Fiction or not, you should do more research on your poisons. Thallium is almost always fatal. If the victim does not die the long term effects are not pretty. She would have lost the baby. It is along the effects of arsenic, it would be hard to hide it in plain water. Also Why would Jose poison Ana?
| lindabellcrandall chapter 3 . 6/23
Good story so far but I have a few helpful things to impart to you... Spellchecker. Proof read before the upload, you'll find that there are a few mistakes.
| lindabellcrandall chapter 31 . 6/23
You went from calling the baby Emmalin to Phoebe, why?
| jayhawk78 chapter 33 . 3/18
I enjoyed your vision. What happened to Ethan? When was he murdered?
| Nan chapter 5 . 2/22
You know, the story-line is good, but -forgive me for saying - you really should work on your writing. You have the talent, that much is clear, but you are expressing yourself as if you were speaking instead of writing. It makes a huge difference but it can be easily rectified. It's just some basics, like using question and exclamation marks where needed instead of full stops, or having parts of a sentence as separate sentences if you can't link them properly. For example: "Just the thought of her drinking with that lowlife dug at my soul. Didn't she know what I felt for her?!"
Anyway, I'm sorry of I offended you, it wasn't my intention.
| Vicky Smith chapter 33 . 2/13
An exceptional story that kept me reading and reading, not wanting to stop.I loved it. Thank you for your time and talent. It was wonderful.
| Foggynights chapter 3 . 1/24
| donna.vispo chapter 33 . 1/24
What a great story! I read it all today!
| Ehundl chapter 33 . 1/16
This is a great suspenseful story!
| lynnb1009 chapter 33 . 1/10
Loved it! Love how it went full circle!
| HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
loved it! Stupid Christian!