|Reviews for In The Morning Light|
| SpaghettiTacos chapter 31 . 2/6
You are all types of Satan, my friend, ALL TYPES.
The fellow writer in me is proud. The read wants to beat you with a chair.
Either way you did a great job.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/5/2013
I think this story is really great so far but I feel like kenzi would have reacted differently to Bo's death. I mean they were like sisters do I feel like she would have been devastated At the loss of Bo. I also think that she wouldn't have been thinking of dyson like that immediately afterward. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway I'm just trying to give advice and if you want to completely ignore everything I've just said that's fine because this really is a great story. But I just though I would mention it
| Guest chapter 31 . 6/14/2013
I hate you so much for the ending. Why?! AH! Just- Kill me now.
| claire3loves3music chapter 31 . 6/8/2013
Oh my lord this story has been a roller coaster! Like a bad dream. And I mean that in a good way. It had its extremely dark "I can't believe she wrote that!" (I mean no one willing kills bo and hale) and its light sweet bit with dyson and kenzi. and the absolute terror of the werewolf! Its not easy to cause extreme fright through words alone but you did it.
And that ending! Wow I feel like I can't breathe I'm so shocked. I had a sickening feeling that would happen but I still can't believe that it did. Just when I thought that the horror was over...
This was so well written! Usually I lose interest in many chaptered stories but this had me anxiously waiting for updates.
Part of me hopes that you will write a sequel so dyson gets a happy ending where trick fixes it as an apology and the other part hopes you don't because it was so shocking and sad and horror movie-ish.
| katnassy chapter 31 . 6/1/2013
Thank you for a great story, though truth be told i thought you'd be a bit more lenient towards your characters after all they'd been through. There's a host of unanswered questions and avenues to go forward along if you choose so one day.
| katnassy chapter 30 . 6/1/2013
That's a hell of a twist. The End just kills me.
| Aussie SciFi Tragic chapter 30 . 6/1/2013
Such a good fic. Complex, detailed and multi layered.
Unusual having Bo die so early so I realized this fic was going to be different.
Such a complicated and original bag girl who had elements of both white hat and black hat in her. Such a tortured upbringing.
Interesting twist at the end!
| Jommy26 chapter 30 . 5/31/2013
wow bitter sweet end the werewolf is dead but so is Terra and she was innocent, poor Bo, Hale and Bo is dead , Dark Fae are dead [but I don't care about them] and it ends with Trick and Dyson odds and bet it didn't help with Trick's ding dong attitude [as in "ding dong the werewolf is dead"] now question is whole ending Kenzi possible turning into a werewolf just a simple twist end like what horror movies do like implying there is going to be a sequel when there is no such 1 or is there going to be a sequel to this, ?I hope there is 1 love it
| Jommy26 chapter 29 . 5/28/2013
ok this chapter has me conflicted between sad and relief sad because the good half that is Terra is dead and relief because they psycho werewolf bad half ithat killed Bo, and Hale and took out 1 of Tricks's eyes is dead , ok confused Trick stripped Dyson's memory of Terra once upon a time? , post more soon
| katnassy chapter 29 . 5/26/2013
Amazing chapter! You've never slackened the tension and the drama. I just love the last line. Hope it's not yet the end?
| Jommy26 chapter 28 . 5/18/2013
Oh thank God Dyson found Kenzi, I hope they make it out of this ,wonder how Dyson will react when he finds out that's not Jessa Mae but her daughter . and is she his daughter too, or is that just something she told Terra ? post more soon
| katnassy chapter 28 . 5/17/2013
Great chapter. The ellipsis is doing me in, please update soon
| TheMinKitty chapter 27 . 5/12/2013
As totally uncalled for as this is, I feel like it's fitting:
It was only as kiss
How did it end up like this
It was only a kiss
Only a kiss
Now that that is off my chest...Jesus effing christ! People are just dying left and right here, its...awesome! This story is pretty good, though why the eff is this rated T? I mean, jesus. Well, anyways. Props on a creative and original story line. I read all 27 chapters in one sitting, and I can honestly say I didn't see any of this coming when I started reading. So, mad props, son.
| Jommy26 chapter 27 . 5/14/2013
I kinda feel bad for Terra despite her wolf killed Bo , Hale, a much a Dark Fae and terrorizing Kenzi and Dyson but she and her wolf seem so different is unless she's conning Kenzi , I hope she gets out and Dyson finds her , post more soon
| katnassy chapter 27 . 5/12/2013
' daughter,that' s a twist, you are not relieving the tension. I totally like you are going to end it soon.