Reviews for Definitely Not Flameos
Poetrygirl21 chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
That would be so awesome if Zuko's daughter and Aang's son got married.
A Fire Nation Citizen chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
:) Yes, I did enjoy it. :) It's too bad they killed the Bumi-"Ursa" (perfect name for her i'd say) theory. I really like that pairing. :)
vacivity chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Amazing. Your future!Mai was definitely spot on in my opinion (especially with her calling Zuko a dweeb). Great job. :)
Pulchra Veritatem chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Interesting story. I hope you continue it
grizzlybairparty chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Awww! Mai is IC and rather amusing. She's motherly, but still very MAI. Good job!
theredrobin chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Couldn't resist taking a peek at this one because, well, "Flameo, Hotman!"

I think you characterized adult Mai really nicely, an understanding mother to Ursa while all her reticence remains intact along with the sly, deadpan comment about Bumi. Oh, and her calling Zuko a dweeb and being utterly endeared by it is just spot on.
profssrlockhart chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I really like Ursa's personality, and I think you're a really good writer! Please continue soon (:
Private Fire chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Ha. Ha. Looks like you're I'm the camp which says there is something between Zuko's daughter and son. I like the mother /daughter interaction.
Spry chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
YAY A FUTURE MAIKO FIC! :D Abd a good one, too. :) Mai was pretty much spot on, here, and I can't think of any constructive criticism, so I guess this amounts to a pretty lane review-thing. SORRY! :p

So here, have an assortment of DELICIOUS, overly-frosted baked goods that may or may not have explosives in them! :D

devikaa chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Ahaha, I loved it! Bumi/Ursa is genius. Loved the discreet hints. #sneaky
Ski October chapter 1 . 7/14/2012

This was just awesome.
Nice Bumi/Ursa hints.
iseewhatyoudidthere ;D