|Reviews for My silver lining|
| Bad Wolf and Timelords chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
Please write more very soon!
| Crazy Devil Girl chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
please update soon LUV IT
| ScottishFever chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
please update soon
| Jane-Volturi'24 chapter 5 . 12/25/2012
I love the story and I'm whiling to read more. Hovewer, I think you should consider finding a Beta Reader fast. It would amaze you how much readers you'd attract with someone helping you with grammar and spelling mistakes. Good luck
| bookfanatic34 chapter 5 . 12/25/2012
Merry Christmas to you too and please update soon!
| JustNata chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
Please please please update soon... :)
| laddi chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
please update soon!
| Jay chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
| AlexCullen3141890 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Great beginning can't wait to hear more!
| Prince of Vegeta chapter 3 . 9/20/2012
not bad not bad at all
| Black Star 145885 chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
I LOVE IT, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Hart2Hartgirl98 chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
keep writing its really good
| Jinjing chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
It's a good start, though I really think that if you have a beta reader or someone to read over it to catch any mistakes this story can be a lot better. One thing that helps me a lot when I finish a chapter is to read it out loud. Anything that is wrong will sound wrong, so it's easy to catch these mistakes.
You have one specific sentence where one spelling mistake made do a O_O "uh what?"
"... where she Raped her arms around my neck..."
I think you mean "wrapped" not "Raped".
Hopefully my review didn't come off mean because I think you can have a good story if you fix a good percentage of mistakes.
Keep updating! :3
| Novaya Model chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
I very much like this story so far an I can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012