Reviews for My silver lining
Bad Wolf and Timelords chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
Please write more very soon!
Crazy Devil Girl chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
please update soon LUV IT
ScottishFever chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
please update soon
Jane-Volturi'24 chapter 5 . 12/25/2012
I love the story and I'm whiling to read more. Hovewer, I think you should consider finding a Beta Reader fast. It would amaze you how much readers you'd attract with someone helping you with grammar and spelling mistakes. Good luck
bookfanatic34 chapter 5 . 12/25/2012
Merry Christmas to you too and please update soon!
JustNata chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
Please please please update soon... :)
laddi chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
please update soon!
Jay chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
AlexCullen3141890 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Great beginning can't wait to hear more!
Prince of Vegeta chapter 3 . 9/20/2012
not bad not bad at all
Hermione Voldemort Riddle chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
Hart2Hartgirl98 chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
keep writing its really good
Jinjing chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
It's a good start, though I really think that if you have a beta reader or someone to read over it to catch any mistakes this story can be a lot better. One thing that helps me a lot when I finish a chapter is to read it out loud. Anything that is wrong will sound wrong, so it's easy to catch these mistakes.
You have one specific sentence where one spelling mistake made do a O_O "uh what?"
"... where she Raped her arms around my neck..."
I think you mean "wrapped" not "Raped".
Hopefully my review didn't come off mean because I think you can have a good story if you fix a good percentage of mistakes.
Keep updating! :3
Novaya Model chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
I very much like this story so far an I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
Mooooore please!