|Reviews for The End|
| RaggingLightningWolf chapter 8 . 2/26
i curse you for wrighting such an excelent story then leaving it at a clift hanger I Comand you update emidiatly
| Iris chapter 8 . 3/19/2013
Completely in love with this story! please update :)
| girl chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
it awesome love the sassy demon
| AshleyHoechlin chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
Hi it been over a month now and I'm still waiting .when will you be posting the next chapter? I've said it before but let me say it again I love this fic and I don't care bout the writing mistakes an crap like that because you are totally AWESOME :) update soon please
| Chris chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Hi there :)
I assume you don't have a beta? I'll suggest you get one :)
I only read the first paragraph, but I got nothing out of it, since every sentence was way too long, with way too many "and"'s in it ._.
A tip is that you rather than saying he did that, while that and that and then that and he also did this, you use some periods.
I'm not sure wheter this is your writing style, or if you're trying to make it as "Stiles"-ish as possible, but either way it's very disturbing when reading :)
I wish you good luck with the story though, I won't read on, but I bet it's good anyways, since so many people seem to like it ;)
I'm not saying anything to be mean, only as an advise to make it easier for readers to follow the story.
Hugs from Chris
| dhh chapter 8 . 10/4/2012
I have to say, this story seems pointless UNLESS it's about UGLY ASS scott with his PSYCHOB*TCH of a gf etc, and STILES being under-appreciated, then I'd say, CANON!
| dhh chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
One ?..Where's the dad?
| TheStereotypicalShipper chapter 8 . 10/4/2012
Don't give up Stiles!
| SamanthaFreita3 chapter 7 . 9/22/2012
I have a question... he stabbed himself right? What happened to the wound?
| Mason and Alex chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
love it xD
| AshhhleyD chapter 7 . 9/19/2012
Ok so here's my thing uhm I totally love this fic you are so awesome but I don't know if I'm mstaken or what but I'm just thinking wasn't stiles stabbed in chapter-6 ? But now they just say he hit his head..and I'm so waiting for derek to kiss him or say that he has feelings for stiles or something lol but great job you know just how to keep me coming back for more lol
| personalcolor chapter 7 . 9/18/2012
That fic is so cool! Seriously. I can't wait to read the rest :)
| BlueMonkeyDoll chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
Too lazy to log in. BUT, this has been awesome, The demon was really cool, I feel a little bad for it. Love the Sterek! They're so cute, Ship them so hard!
| itsDON chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
Poor Stiles, getting hurt like that i hope that the demon is gone... or is gonna be gone soon because its obvious hes planning of killing Stiles if he doesn't comply
| FeelsQueen chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
I don't know what to say other than PERFECT. The way Derek cares about Stiles' safety. And when he takes his hand, gives it a squeeze and says that he has to come back because "we need you"? All I see is him thinking "I need you". Maybe I'm biased since I'm a major Sterek shipper, prob THE most shippiest of shippers but seriously, that's how I saw that scene. Also, can't wait for the next chapter. And papa Stilinski's reactions and stuff lol
Well done QE! :D