Reviews for First Breath : Awakening
Guest chapter 67 . 12/2/2014
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 67 . 9/3/2014
Fantastic story liked it a lot I’m sorry to see it end.
ladeerelli chapter 67 . 6/17/2014
I am so so so sad it's over! This was an awesome storyline! Great job!
Dancer who loves Westerns chapter 67 . 1/20/2014
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 67 . 11/6/2013
pretty excellent story it sad to see that it is over
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 67 . 11/4/2013
This was a good story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over.
jakanddaxterfreak chapter 67 . 5/8/2013
I wish to see a sequel to the two "First Breath" stories. This time, Willow will tell her story about teenhood and living the life of a princess in Tabor.
BetaGirl09 chapter 67 . 12/27/2012
You have a talent for story telling but you need to let a beta check your writing. Please write more SWATH related stories.
BetaGirl09 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Your writing is so good. Enjoying this continuation.
RhizOneill chapter 67 . 11/12/2012
Have enjoy reading this! Hope to read more of your stories one day!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 67 . 11/11/2012
This was a great chapter liked it a lot please update soon
LenaLove95 chapter 67 . 11/10/2012
That was just perfect! A perfect ending! I'm sad its ending but I really think you left them at a great place. I'm so happy with how this story has turned out. Its been an amazing journey! You're an amazing writer! Will you be writing another SWATH story soon?
RhizOneill chapter 66 . 11/5/2012
Great chap!
Ejsmommy chapter 66 . 11/5/2012
You're not going to have his first wife Sara be alive too, are you? Cuz that would suck!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 66 . 11/5/2012
Great chapter liked it a lot please update as soon as you can.
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