Reviews for Azul
SarahE7191 chapter 6 . 7/20/2012
Love it!
Somebody chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
I don't know what to say...you had me crying a lot and I'm very sad right now...
MagicalBender chapter 6 . 7/20/2012
I just found this. I mean, im not thrilled about it, but honestly, it actually the most realistic out of them. Thank you and you're such a good writer! I loved the 'good' Azula lol I really do like the story, and I'm excited to see how you end this!
Nekocin chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
You ended me with a lot of gut wrenching the moment you killed off Azula (she never even married, so solely dedicated to her family, her brother, her nation and the many nephews and nieces) and then explained how each and every one of the characters had passed on. Oh gods. :gross sobbing: Though I love the bittersweetness of both Zuko and Katara going through together over the years.

I love the fact how you integrated the prequel of sorts of Legend of Korra into this story. Omg, Tenzin and Lin why are you not canon? Look how cute you were back then! And then the mention of their other children :foaming:

Anyway, still one chapter to go and I can't wait to see how you'll conclude this fic.
KagomeHime369 chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
My tears...they won't stop falling T_T soo many deaths, but the one that got to me was Blue. You know, it sounds like something she would have done. I think you've written her beautifully :)
Looking forward to seeing how Zuko reacts to Korra!
AnnaAza chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
A very, very sad chapter. Almost everyone died! Azula, wow. She was very brave, up until the end. I loved the ending of this chapter. I can't wait to see how you end this story!
always-whelmed chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
I have been corrected once again by your amazin writing talent.

But now, I can't get that image of a VERY Old Zutara doing the nasty-if that's what you meant- it just won't dissapear...
CosmoSpiritVarie417 chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
Awww! First Azula and then everyone else. It's sad how Toph and Sokka went. D': I started crying and then I'm here at work so I had to hide the tears from customers. DX When Aang went, that's when I started bawling. Can't wait for the end!
GameFreak chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
You better make it better, damn it! Because I'll go anger issues on you! (takes calming breaths) so can you update soon...please.

Huffity-huff-huff.

-GameFreak
Azure chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
bah, thats proper dutch, for rubbish
DoctorxXxMerlin chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
Thanks for breaking my heart i didn't need it anyway.

Your writing is magnificent, and your grammar is fabulous, you have a few typos but not enough that it detracts from the story. After this story you need to write something that doesn't cause me, your loyal reader, to drown in my own tears. I'm going to reread shattering ice again in an attempt to mend my heart.
SarahE7191 chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
I am a little pissed but I just have my fingers crossed that you will have them together before they are grangran's age.
sailorvicks chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Hahhaa I'm glad you knew you would get hate mail... I love this story, you are such a talented writer and I can just get lost in reading your stories. Though reading this chapter I was yelling at my laptop going "I hate you! really! they were going to so well together then you got Katara back with Aang!" and would flick over to facebook for a sec, then come back and read again because you just entice me that much! No matter how angry you are that you Kaanged this story, though I do love both Zutata and Kaang... did you have to string us along and break out hearts? Though from a climax point of view well done! I can't wait for more stories!

Love always sailorv
xoxxx
Nekocin chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
:gross sobbing: I want to say I hate you for making me cry throughout the fic but I won't. I'll just declare my love for you for writing such a wonderful piece that borders between love and strong, strong friendship. It is a fine line between the whole AangKatara and ZukoKatara situation, a very thin fine line to breech and wander about. On a side note, I absolutely love the humorous parts in the fic, like Azula trying to convince Katara that Zuko is awesome, like Sokka using his daughter's hands to cheer for Suki and Azula's one-sided victory, the moment Zuko and Katara caught Hakoda and Ursa do questionable things in the kitchen... and so on.

I absolutely adore how you wrote Azula and Katara's friendship, especially how much Azula had changed.

Overall thank you for sharing this story. I can't wait to see how the rest will be concluded.

PS there were some typos in your work but nothing too daunting to make my eyes twitch.
juana24 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I can't help but feel hopeless (and angry) for the Zutara, almost to the point where I want to stop reading this out of spite. However, I will not (try not) to make this hate mail, as obviously your writing is so well written that it has gotten me on the edge of my seat. The only thing is is that I kind of get frustrated in many different stories, movies, etc. when the "hero" (Aang) struggles to save the world, but easily ends up "getting the girl" without a fight. I do realize, however, that you do emphasize that Zuko didn't so much to have a chance at all, which I respect. However, you threw me a curve ball when you had Toph say that she loved both guys but was IN LOVE with Zuko; I thought you would make Katara make the right decision before it was over. I would've thought that being "in love" would overpower all else, but in this case it didn't.
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