Reviews for Justice League: FFDCU
Lloyd Max chapter 4 . 8/28/2014
Awesome Justice League origin story please update this, don't leave me hanging!
Kyer chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
Okay...I'll admit I snickered at Wally's "Last Resort Attack".
Marmite Jones chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
I love iiiiiiit. Well written and staying well within character. Can't wait for more.
Jazbez chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
The heroes exchanged worried glances. Wonder Woman sighed. "Anything else you want to tell us?" She asked.

"You have amazing boobs." The Flash said with a dumb smile on his face. He straightened when he realized what he said. "Wait, what?"

Wonder Woman pulled the lasso off of him. "Men."
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Really Wally?

Love the story, don't know how I've never seen it before.
Since Wally is the fFlash in this are you going to add others that weren't a part of the original league? Like Shayera, always lived her :3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Wow, this is honestly one of the best Justice League stories I have ever read, and its only the first chapter! The way everyone has come together so far is brilliant, and even if he didn't exactly make a big splash, the Wally cameo made me smile. I like that out of the four heroes you introduced in this chapter, none of them felt unimportant... there was a strong sense that each one belonged here, and they all had adequate screen time, something that many people are unable to pull off when writing a team. Even Steve Trevor felt vital and important to the story, and here I was expecting him to be a background character... I am very pleased to say that I was wrong about that. The dialogue between them all was great. I also liked how you were creative with Green Lantern's constructs, you didn't just have him making hammers or big fists all the time.

There were a few errors here and there, but nothing major and it never really deterred the flow of the story.

I'll be honest, when I first started the FFDCU, I was worried about who might want to write Justice League... because, as a staple of the entire universe, I knew that it would have to be good, in order to validate the project's merit. I'm pleased to say that Justice League could not have gotten a better man for the job, and I'm interested to see where you take this.
Kyer chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
This already has a better beginning than the DC52 JL book. (More action along with the fun dialogue/camaraderie) Please don't have Darkseid wimp out. I heard that was the biggest disappointment there.
Hawk2012 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
great opening chapter, looking forward to your next update