Reviews for Comeback
TayloRRR chapter 4 . 2/25/2014
Please update!
scorchedtrees chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
This is really well-written, especially compared to some other fics I've seen in the BP category. All the characters seem like themselves, instead of being majorly OOC, which is great. I like how you're not rushing Kiri and Narumi's relationship. Hope you update :)
Himeno Kazehito chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
I really like this fiction
Jem Juliette Jewels Jade chapter 4 . 10/13/2012
Mor plz! :)
ScRamb1ed chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
bestest summary ever.
Jaizina chapter 4 . 7/26/2012
I'm kind of surprised this doesn't have reviews yet. It's pretty good, although it doesn't seem to be going anywhere at this point (but you said, you are stumped, so I'll let that go).

I really like your analysis of the manga and the speech bubbles. I've never really noticed (or really paused for that matter) when reading in my head. As for the story so far, I find cute. It has a nice flow.

I hope you keep writting (and eventually update that summary when you decide where to take this)!