Reviews for The Alpha Pair Fight
Maria chapter 1 . 1/7
I'm sorry to say I hated it. Jacob would not be that aggressive and stupid and Bella would never let herself be abused, because that what it was, like that
TinaF chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
Loved it!
guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
I love it! It is an interesting story! I would enjoy reading more!
miriskaswan chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Please, please , please do a full story with this Alpha pair is seriously awesome please!
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Interesting. Dominant Jake is impressive. "Leading our warriors into battle against undead devils", great writing here. Bella is impressive as the mate who can assist with the strategy and just needs to get him to listen to her. She seems strong. Really good.
awesomeami316 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
I really want to see where this goes! Please continue it!
Dirtiestmind69 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Please don't make this a one shot! I need more
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Pleeeeeaaaase continue!
Jessica Black Lahote chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
UH DEFINITELY NEED TO CONTINUE!
xXxAlilordessxXx chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Love it, there's not a lot of sexy stories like this :D
starchick7003 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Wow I loved it! Amazing job if like to see it expanded now I'm going to check out this dark savior that was talke about! Thanks for the quick read
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Pretty please continue this! I love it!
Princess10 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
you should continue this dtory.
ReaderFTW chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Well that was anticlimactic. It was really hot then you just said they went back to the cottage! What is that?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Holy crap! You have to right more! This was awesome! I love the dominate pair!
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