|Reviews for Just a Number|
| juicytreat2 chapter 16 . 5/21
Loved this story! Thank you for sharing it.
| CSG chapter 16 . 5/20
I enjoyed this one. I started it yesterday & read it in between everything going on. I like stories like this. Thanks for sharing it.
| renewagain chapter 16 . 2/19
Yaaaay awesome story wa sawesome. Second time ;)
| renewagain chapter 13 . 2/19
Ugh I still can't believe they walked in on them but they are handling it. But still realistic which is good. Who could listen to all the parentals and then not hve some confusion. Not me!
| renewagain chapter 11 . 2/19
Ooohhhh I remember this lol
| renewagain chapter 10 . 2/19
Bye bye everyone. Finally!
| renewagain chapter 9 . 2/19
Oh sweetheart. He said that.
Dying. I'm dying. I'm so glad to read this. I forgot it all. Thank you god for bad memory.
| renewagain chapter 8 . 2/19
Ok I have to stop copying all your words to comment on them. But yaayyyyy. Finally. I love that Bella is more mature than him.
| renewagain chapter 7 . 2/19
So, I'm so glad they talked and now her response is perfect. Like the whole thing is twisted now. She had no idea he felt that way. Deliciousness
Also...his PERFECT RESPONSE.
"Past aside. Edward, if I were anyone else... If you felt this way for anyone else, what would you do?"
Her eyes were so wide and innocent, he couldn't help but remember the girl she was when they first met. The girl he'd adored and cherished. Unable to resist, he brushed her cheek with the back of his knuckles. "I couldn't feel this way for anyone else," he admitted in a whisper.
| renewagain chapter 6 . 2/19
Oh wow I didn't see that coming. Also bc I didn't k is what they were quoting
Um also this and I was jittery. But it got even better.
I wanted to cheer!
His eyes searched hers. It might have been her imagination, but she could have sworn his breath stuttered. "Okay," he agreed, taking a step back. (When she was posing )
| renewagain chapter 5 . 2/19
Omg omg omg this whole chapter. I'm so glad I'm reading this again.
But almost as soon as their kiss was broken, he put two fingers under her chin, tilting her head up and claiming her lips again.
And then when he told her she was a child and her eyes are all big. Stab me while I'm lusty why don't you?
And then he brings Rosalie. Sigh. I love stoopid masochistic Edward.
| renewagain chapter 4 . 2/19
Omg I'm all feeling the memories.
It wasn't just that he had no right to do what he'd done. What made it all the worse - and what could be worse than taking advantage of a child - was that to this day, six years later, he still daydreamed about that kiss. He could still remember how very sweet it was: the emotion of that kiss, the tenderness of it, and the taste of her lips, and the way her body fit the lines of his. And yet, for something that was so small and innocent, the need that rushed through him then was powerful. He remembered so well, he had to close his eyes, craving the gentle touch of her lips to his, locking his body in place until the feeling passed.
| renewagain chapter 3 . 2/19
Ooooh jealous Edward. That's the way to make him wake up a little bit.
| renewagain chapter 2 . 2/19
Awwwwww yeah it was suddenly TY. But now I'm ready for the reveal. Yesss I'm so glad he tapped on the window!
| renewagain chapter 1 . 2/19
Ok so now I'm gonna reread this bc why not? But also I'm convinced he was an actor but that was another one I guesssssssss