Reviews for Makoto's Birthday
4Shame chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Oh my word that was beautifully done and left me so sad. Excellent work!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
That was so sweet and sad, and it fit perfectly with her personality. I loved every word of this!
ElysianNeptune chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
This was an amazing atory. The end gave me chill bumps, it was a bittersweet ending, but I enjoyed it. I loved the way you described her parents.