Reviews for The Fourth
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
This should have been the scene before the confession. You catch Bayliss' syntax so well. Tim was my favorite character and I've always hated that they took that last year and tore him apart. And then to force Frank to be the one to essentially be the one to take away what's left of his life was awful. Its like the creators and writers wanted to destroy any nobility or honor the two main characters had.I think what you've written is perfectly atuned to Bayliss' turmoil.