Reviews for This Isn't an Ordinary Love Story
Jazzysauce chapter 8 . 4/20
Wouldn't any date out in public really be a bad idea? It's pretty obvious that Bruce at least is a lot older than Clint, and any student could see them and recognize them.
Reynadraki chapter 14 . 11/18/2014
me encanto, habrĂ¡ secuela o algo?
PrincessAgainstThePatriarchy chapter 14 . 1/3/2013
I live the way you ended your story! XD I love it!
Precira chapter 14 . 12/7/2012
I loved your story so much! First time that I read something with such a friendship between Clint and Tony and that really feels right. I loved seeing Steve and Tony together as an extra couple, and Loki messing around was a really good idea, althought it was kind of weird to read about Betty acting like a bitch anyway thank you for that amazing story!
MaestroANC chapter 14 . 11/20/2012
*cries* Birthday, pancakes, ice-cream cakes, games and sex *hearts*
I love this story :D
Thank you for making and finishing this *hugs*hugs*hugs*
go.suck.on.a.lemon chapter 14 . 11/20/2012
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed that, very well constructed and so sweet. (Also, wicked work with le dialogue tag stuff. XD)
Jess chapter 14 . 11/20/2012
Wonderful ending! I enjoyed reading this fic so much I'm sad to see it finished..but it was great! Hope to see other fics like this one from you!
go.suck.on.a.lemon chapter 13 . 11/19/2012
This is rather well written, and I love the conflict development. Also, it's nice to see your villains having motives, that aspect is so often overlooked. I very much look forward to reading more.

I will offer one small bit of editing advice, if you'll permit me. It's to do with your dialogue tags. I know this is finicky, but dialogue can be hard to parse out if it is combined in a paragraph with action focusing on another character. For example:

"Oh please. Do not think of me as a fool. You and Stark are birds of a feather; if one of you came up with a plan, then the other is involved." Clint turned back to Loki, his own blue eyes filled with a cool clam.

"And what plan would that be, Loki?" Loki glared at him, but Clint didn't budge. He'd taken on Thor during the wrestling unit in P.E.; Loki wouldn't be nearly as challenging if it came to physical blows.

Though this scene is more clear than some others, due to character intentions, the more defined paragraphing here would follow thus:

"Oh please. Do not think of me as a fool. You and Stark are birds of a feather; if one of you came up with a plan, then the other is involved."

Clint turned back to Loki, his own blue eyes filled with a cool clam."And what plan would that be, Loki?"

Loki glared at him, but Clint didn't budge. He'd taken on Thor during the wrestling unit in P.E.; Loki wouldn't be nearly as challenging if it came to physical blows.

The dialogue and action of the characters are united, making it unmistakable who is speaking. I know I'm being nitpicky, but I do like to leave con-crit. And again, I look forward to reading more, your work is promising.
theavengers101 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Oops, that last review was accidentally posted unfinished. Yeah so this is supposed to go on chapter 13 haha.. I REALLY hope you see this!

Oh. My.

Okay. So for the past three days I have been reading your story. You may not realize just how much it means that I read the entire thing, but it's definitely not normal for me. In all honesty I have never read a fanfiction all the way through that was more than 5 chapters. I will skim through some and get this main plot, so this was a first for me. In many ways. I never have even thought of a Clint/Bruce pairing, so when I saw this story I was thinking "What..? Why would that even happen?" So I decided to just kind of check it out. I loved the whole teachers and students things, and eventually I realized I had read the first chapter. It was amazing, so I went on to the next. Later it was like the fifth chapter and I just kept wanting more, and I realized how strange it was that I made it that far into a fanfic I would NEVER think to get involved with. I'm hardcore Clintasha, yet I. Loved this. I can't even describe how much. I am so happy I stumbled upon this because it's probably one of the best well written fanfictions I have ever read! Mainly just because I am always lazy to read long ones, but yours was so involving..

I'm sorry, I'm rambling on! I am soo eager for you to continue this. Xxx
theavengers101 chapter 13 . 11/18/2012
Oh. My.

Okay. So for the past three days I have been reading your story. You may not realize just how much it means that I read the entire thing, but it's definitely not normal for me. In all honesty I have never read a fanficti
MaestroANC chapter 13 . 11/14/2012
LOL, Loki drinks Slimquick? Clint and Tony still need to be careful though, Loki seems like he has a really long stick up his butt.
Lux chapter 13 . 11/13/2012
BRUCE CLINT! Hope Loki will not do anything bad :/ I love your storyyy! I can't wait to see Bruce reaction 3
Jess chapter 13 . 11/13/2012
I really loved this chapter! It was nice to hear from Bruce's point of view. Hope you'll update again soon! I'll totally be looking for it
Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
Hehehe. Well, it's starting out well for clint by far. A little "After-School" activity with Mr. Banner :D
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Kinda sweet and goofy in it's own way. Can't wait to read more :D
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