Reviews for The Stranger
make-mine-a-kiaora chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Very evocative. Would definitely like to read more...
Becca chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Great start Faye.
I can see the author is more than a little enamored with Harry which translates well into Alice & this reader. Nice familiar feeling touches to Harry with the dancing & hands on hips - even though we haven't seen these from him on the screen yet.
I will happily read more of this story.
brookesey chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Wow! woo hoo!
I love it! it's really different - love the fact that it's set during WW2!
Love Alice.
and you already know how I feel about that bloke she's dancing with :)
(I knew it was him)

More more more! and Quickly!
Ruby Rosetta Red chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Interesting start. For a first fic it has a lot of promise.

One little thing, your dialogue, i don't know whether it's because of how it has uploaded but you don't need a new line for the 'he said', 'she called' part after the line of dialogue. It seems to occur throughout the chapter and it's slightly distracting.

But apart from that, good start :)