|Reviews for Paradoxical Sleep|
| clow-san chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Haha! I love your dedication.
This is truly a nice way to end this story. I like how transitioned to real life but still have that dream like quality. Please write more.
| tjenkins91 chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Great story :) i'm glad Penny and Sheldon got together in the end
| Zenkindoflove chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Awww, I'm really sad this story is over. It was so wonderful and you really should write more Shenny in the future.
I loved the entire train experience. There is something so romantic and old fashion about riding on a train and I think it's cute that you essentially had that be Penny's reaction. There were so many sweet moments in this chapter between them and I'm glad that Sheldon revealed his feelings for Penny. Like I've said before, I think what makes this story feel so believable and authentic is the intimacy developed in their dream worlds.
Interesting that once they were together, their dreams stopped connecting. It's as if something out there wants them to be together always, even when they're miles apart.
I loved that you gave us a glimpse into their future in the epilogue. Not a lot of fics do that but it felt right with this story.
| Krystal Jaymes chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Absolutely stunning work! Loved every second of it!
| Lightningbolt81 chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Aww I'm so glad about the ending, and I don't think their friends would believe them about the shared dreams.
| BreathlessFaith chapter 8 . 7/30/2012
Sheldon and Penny's first kiss being on a train is very was so sweet Penny asking did he want to kiss again and Sheldon asking Could they. I'm so glad Penny finally told Sheldon what was wrong and his assuring her that it was her mother who is wrong. Now sadly I'm off to read the eppilogue.
| TheGodsCanDance chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
My God but I love the way you write! This epilogue had me grinning like a loon, my heart filled to bursting with love...for Penny, for Sheldon and for their story.
You have a talent and a light, respectful and skilful touch. You handle words and plot points and dialogue and characterisations in a manner that makes those of us who notice these things want to throw our heads back and cheer.
Thank you for this story. Thank you for your communication. Thank you and PLEASE keep wrting :-)
| TheGodsCanDance chapter 8 . 7/30/2012
*flails for words*
*reaches thru screen and hugs you*
Perfectly presented, you brilliant creature. Well bloody done!
Thank you for honouring this story every step of the way. The endpoint, as just one example, was perfection.
Mad love and kudos, honey. Mad love and kudos.
| ms. rosey cheeks chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Loved it. This story was so fun. You wrote Sheldon very well Can't wait to read more from you.
| penny1200 chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
I just finished reading the current chapters, and I really enjoy this story. The interactions between Penny and Sheldon are both in character and surprisingly sweet. Plus, I keep laughing at Sheldon's thoughts, such as his idea of the 'cornhusker code' in this chapter. Looking forward to the final chapter and epilogue.
| Jedimasterathena chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
The title was why I read this story in the first place...WITTY! :D
| Krystal Jaymes chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
Still completely in love with the story! Penny should go Junior Rodeo on her family's asses. Awaiting for when they reveal to each other that they love each other (which they totally do)
| Claudilla chapter 7 . 7/28/2012
So imaginative & affecting; I particularly enjoyed how Sheldon as a man of science acknowledges his feelings & Penny hers too. So true to the characters. You've done a wonderful job & I adore trains, they're so romantic. So I can't wait for the final chapter & epilogue:)
| Zenkindoflove chapter 7 . 7/28/2012
Oh man, so many feelings about this chapter!
I'm curious if Penny will tell Sheldon what upset her. Or maybe Sheldon, even in his tribulations with reading social cues, has pieced together fairly well it had to do with her mother's comments to her. I loved the tenderness of this entire chapter. It's hard to write a selfless, romantic Sheldon and keep him in character, but you've done exactly that. The moment Penny realized she loved him, my heart burst with happiness.
The encounter with Dave was interesting. I like that you maintained a closeness between Penny and him but still depicting him as a very shady character.
This line my heart dying. " I...I care about you deeply, Penny,"
"Goodnight My Someone"
I'm dead. Literally dead. How perfect for both of their characters. I feel like this dream world you've pushed them into really gave you a great leeway of speeding up the intimacy between them. Seeing into each other's subconscious thoughts and being free of normal social pressures really establishes a closeness.
I love that their dream together was just talking and learning about each other. It's something easily that could be done in person but they went to a place that is entirely their own.
I love this fic so much and I'm going to be sad when it's over.
| ul-him chapter 7 . 7/28/2012
Oh Sheldon gotta marry you, you even break your routine to go to a farm, you really got it for the girl.
Looking forward next chapter.