Reviews for Fate's Debt
eye of sparta chapter 14 . 3/13
Amazing please continue.
P.S. will
OriksGaming chapter 1 . 2/19
You seem to have A LOT of trouble with tenses- evident even by just the summary of the story. And there are quite a few spelling errors. This feels rushed, and shoddy as a consequence. Your dialogue could use a bit of work, what with your often incorrect shift between periods and commas. I just can't bring myself to continue reading; I'm getting little to no enjoyment from having to slog through all of these errors.
LordVishnu chapter 14 . 2/14
I really enjoyed this. Shame the story appears to be dead.
zaber999 chapter 14 . 2/11
there trying to do the pergess again please take steps to prepare
cgraham68 chapter 14 . 1/13
great story. I hope you get around to it again.
XBOY40 chapter 14 . 12/20/2016
I know it been over two years but I hope you update again, the story is very good!
OBSERVER01 chapter 14 . 11/23/2016
great fic hope you update this again.
chaser30 chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
i really like this story please update
Republic Che chapter 14 . 10/6/2016
I really, really like this story! and I hope it's updated again!
blackpackager chapter 14 . 10/6/2016
Amazing story please at least give us the end of the fight someday!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/25/2016
Update please
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 7 . 8/21/2016
Are you going to add Nina to the harem!?

xXBlackDragonXx chapter 4 . 8/21/2016
It seems like a mess...I meant Lelouch as a triple agent
Do the Gendo chapter 14 . 8/15/2016
Please continue this whenever you feel like it!
shams1996 chapter 14 . 8/13/2016
I saw that you updated the prince of the yotsuba and i wish to know if you will continue this story?
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