Reviews for Fate's Debt |
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![]() ![]() Please… It’s been years Please update this story! I love it and I check in on it every month for more and it hurts not to see anything…. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, though some moves are questionable such as the fact lelouch revealing himself. But I still like it even with the flaws, I do hope you will continue but if not thank thank you for writing this fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continuaras con la historia? |
![]() ![]() Please continue this |
![]() ![]() I like the storytelling, but there are a large number of grammar/sentence structure errors. Should you ever continue this or another writing project, I would recommend getting someone to help you check it over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cringe at the story's grammar and the interaction between characters seems too forced... I mean... what the hell... I cringe too much while reading this story... please get a beta... |
![]() ![]() dude plz if ur not dead plz update guhuhuhuh |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is if not one of the best Code Geass fanfiction I have read that involve time travel so thank you for the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story, any chance it will continue at all? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would have like to see how this end but oh well good read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() amazing story line and really to follow but my only complaint is that the grammar is a bit off |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY IT IS DEAD!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll still follow it even if the story dead. Really good story writing like your other stories! |