Reviews for Fate's Debt
Murraymint835 chapter 14 . 3/11/2020
Please come back to this story
bloodbrother37 chapter 8 . 2/5/2020
Nice thank you
aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 11 . 1/21/2020
He asks Euphie to not tell Cornelia about him but then he tells her.. lol
aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 7 . 1/20/2020
aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 7 . 1/20/2020
fuck all that fandom shit tho...
Smashing Skunk53 chapter 14 . 7/26/2019
I'm always hoping that you will one day come back to this story, mind if I ask how you loss the motivation for it?
Mr. Page chapter 14 . 5/11/2019
Another fabulous chapter. Not going to lie, Cornelia was VERY fun to read as she clearly enjoyed the Aria. I could hear the praise in Lelouch's voice as he congratulated his big sister on her success.

Well, we've come to the last chapter so far. If this is as far as it goes, then it was a delight to read this much. The detail put into this story, the new Knightmares, the sexy romance, and the aggressive but caring attitude of Lelouch. This was one Re-do Rebellion I really enjoyed reading.
Mr. Page chapter 13 . 5/11/2019
Euphie is getting her own Knightmare?! I don't know whether to be worried or stoked!

And Lelouch is giving Cornelia a supreme Knightmare. I wonder what's going on in that brilliant head of his, what his true plans are. Either way, I'm excited to find out.
Mr. Page chapter 12 . 5/10/2019
Lelouch is helping Euphie, C.C. and Kallen are spying, and Kaguya is fantasizing about her beloved Zero. Yep, things are going smoothly for the time being.

I wonder how things are going to shape up by the time the Special Zone is announced. That was were everything went wrong last time, and if I know Lelouch, he will do EVERYTHING is his power to prevent that horrendous disaster from happening again. His heart couldn't stand to lose Euphie again.

And even if he succeeds, he still has the Emperor and V.V. standing in his way for peace. Yep, the battle is far from over. . . .
Mr. Page chapter 11 . 5/10/2019
Uh oh. . . . Wrong sword. . . . Tohdoh's NOT going to be happy.

Anyway, good chapter. That exchange between Zero and Cornelia was very good. The idea that Lelouch was the "Master" behind the rebellion must've been earth-shattering for Cornelia. Nevermind that her two siblings are still alive; the idea that Lelouch is helping Zero carry out his revenge must have blown her mind.

Though, of course, we know the truth behind the veil. It'll be interesting to see how this plays out.
Mr. Page chapter 10 . 5/10/2019
Wow that was a HUGE battle! Those three Knightmares were spectacular! Lelouch, Kallen, and C.C. make quite the trio!

Although, I wonder what KIND of hallucinations the ZERO-system will give Lelouch. Bad memories from the previous timeline perhaps?

Also, let's hope Lelouch doesn't forget to pick up those "items" Milly asked him for! ;-)
Mr. Page chapter 9 . 5/10/2019
A new knightmare, a new weapon, and still Lelouch finds a way to please his two beauties.

Rolo's back. I wonder if that's good or bad for Nunnally. . . .

Plus, Lelouch is still bonding with Nina. It's good to see her and the Student Council are still getting a spotlight. Despite how fun the action is, the slice-of-life segments are very much enjoyed.
Mr. Page chapter 8 . 5/10/2019
Another VERY fun chapter.

Lelouch's kindness and encouragement to Nina. His confidence and affection in Euphie becoming a good, fair empress. And of course, his love and lustful tango with Kallen. Very descriptive and steamy! ;-)

All in all, this chapter had a lot to take in, and it was a joy to read. Perhaps, if I can offer some constructive criticism, it could have been separated into two chapters, so as not to be TOO long. Otherwise, a very good chapter. Good work!
Mr. Page chapter 7 . 5/9/2019
OOOH! What a saucy ending! C.C. has such a hot, naughty imagination.

Also Nina's description of Lelouch was very detailed and considerate. I like seeing this side of Nina, especially since it's towards someone who she actually knows personally rather than just an idol. That's not to say Euphie isn't admirable. She certainly is; I happen to love Euphie VERY much. But this is an interesting turn, to see Nina develop feelings for Lelouch. Maybe he and her can grow closer than last time. If not as a couple, than as dear friends.
Mr. Page chapter 6 . 5/9/2019
That was an EXCELLENT chapter! Not only in length, but in feeling. Lelouch saving and trying to understand Nina's pain, as well as helping her see reason. Then, Euphie, hugging her beloved brother. And Lelouch . . . too ashamed to return the embrace because of what he happened in the Special Zone last time.

Got to say: that was a clever and exciting way to be saved from a building. That's the second time Euphie's fallen into Suzaku's lap.

And that ending was even MORE epic than the original. Now that I think about it, I have no idea how Zero and the Black Knights managed to escape without being followed in anime, but YOU managed to turn their vanishing act into a LITERAL vanishing act! Man, that was clever!

Good job!
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