Reviews for mistakes
stinaweena chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
I liked it, wish it had some more foreplay though. I liked how you compared their love to the ocean, it was quite poetic. The ending made me upset, but in a wow-this-ending-is-so-sad-because-they-never-got-together kind of upset. Great job.
DaniBD chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Wow this was poetry.

When I saw:

"He wanted his superior to leave his model life behind for a moment of defective bliss, to witness a different kind of perfection,"

I knew this was going to be good. All the imagery and emotions you put out there was just pleasurably overwhelming. Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
This was very well written !Please write a squeal! My hearts hurts X3
flamyshine chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
This is sad but I enjoyed it. I especially liked the metaphors that you used regarding their love. Thanks for sharing it here :)