|Reviews for The Promised Land|
| Deltahalo241 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
I really enjoyed this, I hope you continue this but if not then it is OK as this can easily work as a one-shot.
| TheForgottenPen chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Aww I hope this gets continued
This story is really well written, and has alot of interesting perspectives about Canaan's and Maria's relationship. Following, hopefully it continues.
| Pokeshipper-Reborn chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Oh, I really, really hope you continue this. It's beautifully written, and... well, it's Canaan x Maria. That alone is a one-way ticket to wonderful. I'd love to see more of this.
| Musicmakesmehigh chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I love this chapter and hope that you will update soon cause it is quite hard to find great stories with good grammar like yours.
| hatobureka chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
MAKE MORE PLEASEEEE IM BEGGING YOU
| partyman chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
do another right f'in now and i'm not joking when i say that was amazing sure there was some grammar mistakes but still amazing no sugoi
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
it is a great start :) Will alphard and canaan become more friends in this? lol. anyways, can't wait to see what happens next.