Reviews for A Cloud Across the Moon
bookworm134 chapter 43 . 9/16/2015
Please can you at least tell me what you were planning for the end? I hate never knowing!

Still amazing though!
bookworm134 chapter 44 . 9/16/2015
That's where you left it!? Really? Wow, I can't tell you which one I liked better. This one or the other. But I sure lover your Janto. Wish you had kept writting. You have some real talent.

Keep up the great work.
ro05 chapter 44 . 8/23/2015
Me encanta esta historia,hay alguna posibilidad de continuarla?...
Bloodsong 13T chapter 43 . 5/8/2015
i understand where ianto is coming from - hart is SO annoying. but he's going to have to come around to realize exactly what 'immortal' and 'from another time' all adds up to, and give jack some slack. not that it will be easy, with their pasts.

excellent work, as usual.
i'm catching up to... oh dear, the end of the postings. i hope more are forthcoming, forthwith! ;)
Bloodsong 13T chapter 41 . 5/3/2015
OH #($%*&!

i had been wondering a few chapters ago when (if?) that was going to happen. yes, let's save it for the worst possible time, right? you are a fiend.
Bloodsong 13T chapter 29 . 4/24/2015
ah, just like old times! here we go again ;)

i was interested to see the year that never was from ianto's point of view, but that would have taken a lot longer. looks like torchwood missed it :)

this way will be fun, too!
Bloodsong 13T chapter 27 . 4/24/2015

and ouch.

it's a shame, because jack is so obviously good for everybody. especially ianto. but as things were going, ianto neede someone to pick him up out of his depression, but then he needs to move on to... find something (someone) in his life. jack never hid the fact he wasn't going to be that.

awesome work.
Bloodsong 13T chapter 20 . 4/23/2015
oh, i just saw this episode last night. this ought to be an interesting version! i can't wait, but lunch break is over...
Bloodsong 13T chapter 15 . 4/15/2015


Bloodsong 13T chapter 13 . 4/15/2015
sounds like someone has been watching 'black butler' lol!
and what a brilliant backstory for jack's 'non-human' rebuttal/answer. silly me, i always thought he meant something pervy, too! (then again, it's jack, so... :X)

and ianto a smooth liar. yes, he would have to be. it's those quiet ones you have to watch out for.
Bloodsong 13T chapter 12 . 4/10/2015
i am just enjoying how they are driving each other crazy. and the yelling. and the heated arguments. and the heated, well, snogging. and arguing about snogging.

and yeah, ianto... on your hands and knees, scrubbing vigorously at the floor, is NOT the way to get someone uninterested in you...! :X

and oh yeah, locked in for 24 hours together. i'm sorry, i just had to snicker.
Bloodsong 13T chapter 8 . 3/30/2015
i like that ianto doesn't just fall for jack's 'charms.'

and i really love this take on the ghost machine!
Bloodsong 13T chapter 7 . 3/27/2015
hahahhha! oh, that was just brilliant :)
jack IS kinda a jerk. :X
Bloodsong 13T chapter 6 . 3/27/2015
hah! this is great... what a permutation of this scene! and everybody's history with torchwood and ianto. hmm, but his name being erased from the databases... interesting!
Bloodsong 13T chapter 5 . 3/27/2015
it's the little things you miss that get you into trouble...

i've been enjoying the story, but being bad and not posting comments on all the chapters :/ i did love the way everyone is depressed and hating their job/life, except gwen. i hope her mood survives, and that she can help the others.
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