Reviews for Lithium
Hlpur chapter 6 . 5/18
Cute story, I liked it. Martha was just the right amount of annoying without crossing the line to bashing.
ReaganAdler chapter 1 . 3/26
I've read both versions of the story now and I far prefer this one. You just have a better writing style, far more mature, and I like that you show Martha some compassion. I'm not a fan of bashing for the sake of bashing. Thank you for a beautiful rendition.
Reagan
Crystalzap chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
beautiful, I loved it and I guess it was better than the story that inspired it as it was fair to Martha and best of all it has JACK! XD I love him he is is so funny and make everything a little more fun ;)
The Mad Traveler chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! I loved that!

Grinning madly,
The mad traveller
jenn008 chapter 6 . 2/15/2014
Love it!
Kytrin chapter 6 . 12/31/2013
Okay, that was a LOT more coherent than the original version. I'm not much of a Martha fan myself, but you were absolutely right that the focus of the original story was off. Many thanks for re-writing it.
brikaspoms chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Very good story!
Hairi Esh Mooncake chapter 5 . 9/26/2013
I'm so glad you made Jack bring Rose to his room. Because just before it happened I had a flash of it. It just felt right to do that.
Elita Zyra chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
SOUL EATER IS AWESOME!(i know it's off topic but i just had to put that out there)
Kylaia78 chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
Really enjoyed the story thanks
Little-miss-laughs-alot chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
Eeeeeee! Loved it! Loved it loveditlovedit! Thanks so much for writing!
evilteddybear chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Thanks, this was great!
greeneyesCutie chapter 6 . 6/7/2013
That was great!
greeneyesCutie chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
I can't express how much I love this story!
greeneyesCutie chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
Huge smiles! I love this story!,
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