I thank you for the chapter.

OZYMANDIAS YOOOOOOOO

Oh for christ's sake... I want to pop into your story and start slapping people and telling the mc to get to Hogwarts already. Forget chapter 16 being after your mc got to hogwarts. That probably wasn't for another 10 chapters in your outlines, and the mere idea of it happening so soon had your muse escaping you.

I suspect if the story had done a better job of setting up this kind of fic I would be totally on board. I can admit a lot of cool stuff is technically happening when I'm not furious at the next thing I can immediately tell will be taking up a lot of time... But it didn't and this feels like an unreasonably long prologue. One I know by looking at the chapter count never left that initial phase. I didn't know to expect this would be the whole story at all.

I'd love to finish this despite it's incomplete state, but I can't bring myself to click on next chapter T_T

I keep looking at the chapter count and thinking it's no wonder. I bet that's just after the story reached Hogwarts. Clearly your tendencies as a writer leaned more toward writing a less constrained story than some teacher at school educating students and doing canon stuff would've been lol

Which is honestly great for fanfic originality... But I'm getting kind of tired of clicking onto the next chapter and wondering which person will take up an entire chapters worth of time. The pace is starting to drag tbh. Unless you intend to destroy Voldemort and finish the story before your mc has his first class, that is. I'm feeling like we should've been at hogwarts chapters ago and this current stuff should've been happening in between classes.

This is a good story. I hope the writer comes back to it.

The author did a great job with Gilderoy unraveling the diary’s secrets.

Great chapter. I liked how Filderoy pretended to let Flitwick take the lead in exposing Pettigrew.

Enjoyed the chapter. Gilderoy getting a crash course in Charms courtesy of Flitwick and a pensieve is a good touch. Could he do the same thing with Defense, via a retired Auror?

Another nice chapter, though Gilderoy is being an officious intermeddler with Amelia’s investigation. Making recommendations based on a newspaper article? If I were Amelia I’d tell him to go suck eggs.

Another great chapter. The MC is fairly quick witted.

Another great chapter. Gilderoy gave the best present possible to Arthur.

The author is correct. What Dumbledore did to Harry very clearly matches with ‘Traumatic Bonding’ theory.

Another great chapter. This possessed version of Gilderoy seems very moral, but he has a doze of his host’s cunning.

Brilliant start. This is a fun first chapter. Gilderoy is an interesting, if amoral, personality.

PARKER NOIUUIIUU QAQQ