|Reviews for Crime Of Passion|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
Very thin filament membrane of consensual sex. Blurred
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Wow, well it's different but a good kind of different. I think too short to really explore the character insanity.
| Gone Into Oblivion chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
| FlightlessBirdje chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
stop biting your nails :-)
I liked it...
| Bevey99 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Not sure how to word this. Like the story sounds wrong, because of demented nature, but the writing
is really good. I appreciate well written stories, I certainly didn't stop reading it. Poor soul.
| RowanBronze chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Dark! Love it! Really was good! Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I loved it! Please post more, don't stop! ;)
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Really really dark. The mind you glimpsed is truly a tortured one. Taken out if context or stand alone it is full of raw energy. Framed into a larger piece it wod cut just as sharpley
| KM525 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I actually love when someone twists one of these 'good guys' into something dark. I understand rape is a touchy subject, but it is also a reality in life. If someone if affected by it, they don't have to read the story. People have problems with death, divorce and adultery too and people write that all the time. *sigh*
Anyway, I enjoyed the intensity of this little story. It's dark & demented and very un-Edward like.
| LikeYouBelieveInMe100 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Wow! Very dark! Nice! :)
| ArekWhitlock chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
It's called obsession...
You wrote his mental state very good:))
| I hate angst chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Wow, just wow.
This is a very good story, I liked how Edwards mind works but I didn't expect him to kill himself.
| Mistydeb chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Well written, shocked that he killed himself though. Didn't think he was gonna do that. I like dark stuff so I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
| Terrabith chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
hahaha don't be worried it was good but i just didn't like how he killed her and then killed himself! I also didn't like the rape but it was still good it was actually really really good just not my type of thing. :)
| Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I like it. It's dark and disturbing but I like it.