|Reviews for Tartarus|
| VeryLongLadder6 chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
Wow, this has been awesome. Really really great. Absolutely bitchin'.
Chapter 13 in particular destroyed me, especially - '"I'll always come back, Jane," Maura said, trying to smile though her voice was deadly serious. "Even if I'm just going across the room."' Tore me to shreds.
I have become completely obsessed with this story. What the hell am I supposed to read now?
| heatwave16 chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
So happy you r writing a sequel. It just can't end there. There has to be a few good guys out there
| valerieeee chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
Why is this the most awesome zombie story I've ever read ever? I have a feeling it's because you wrote it!
| RaneJizzoli chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
*stands up, claps*
Dude that was ridiculously incredibly amazing. I loved every moment. Even the moments when you were stressing me out. Especially those moments to be honest. All evidence to the contrary I really love getting the opportunity to flail madly at my favourite authors. Gah, I cannot believe that a redbull fueled night of photoshop ended up accidentally causing something so ridiculously awesome. Thanks for letting me do your cover as well. Eeehee.
Okay onto more specific commentary on the chapter itself. JESUS christ you had me going there when Frost wasn't answering the Jane. I was in brace for incoming feels mode. So relieved to see him. As usual your drama and banter were perfectly mixed and on point. You are obscenely good at this. It ended at a really nice point too. I can say this without so much as an eye twitch or even the tiniest flail since I know that you're doing a sequel. I AM SUPER EXCITED FOR THIS. And everything else you plan to do in future.
tl;dr this fic was awesome, you're awesome, can't wait for the sequel.
| girlplease chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
Squeeeeee! (I totally thought you were going to kill Frost, I really did.) This was such an exciting ride and I'm so excited that you've decided to do a sequel! I'm going to reread the whole thing and probably leave some sort of long gushing review in your askbox.
| Jobee24 chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
I feel very silly saying this since it's a zombie apocalypse story and all, but this chapter was very sweet. Lol. I'm sure I'm not the only one that breathed a sigh of relief when frost turned up alive. Jane did pretty great in panic mode. And thank goodness you're writing a sequel! Inquiring minds want to know what happens next. I know I've said this before, but zombies ain't my thing, but this story is great!
| slashpony chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
So even with Maura in pain and bleeding, and Jane way out of her depth, you still do the banter like the boss you are.
But I actually just wanted to thank you for writing like a fucking hero these last two weeks. You've given us not just an awe-inspiring tale with zombies, gunfights, vintage motorbikes and awesome OFCs, that inspired the cool Tumblr artwork for this fic's cover. But we also get to witness Maura becoming a true BAMF in her own meticulous way. Not to mention you indulging us with daily updates, and not killing either Jane or Maura (yet).
It's been pretty full-on. Thank you.
| emmacancook chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
That was amazing! I'm glad Frost didn't die, and the end with Jane and Maura was super sweet. Great story!
| catherine8000 chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
Aw, gorgeous! The "...and now the only nice one here gets shot." made me laugh out loud. This story has been amazing. Can't wait for the sequel!
| VeryLongLadder6 chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
'Conclusion'? As in it's nearly the end?! Don't do this to us! This story has been so funny and so smart and so so wonderful. Thank you!
| RaneJizzoli chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
"I'm already impressed and you haven't even told me half of it. But how's your face," she said suddenly, reaching up and grasping Maura's chin lightly between her thumb and forefinger.
Ahhh 1x01 feels!
And AHH. AHHH. WHAT. WHAt. What. YOUR FINISHING AND WHAT. What. Was. That. What. You.. youuuuuuu. I. I have no words. Just a meaningful glare and a finger pointed at Microsoft word. Get back here woman!
| Phaerre chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
Aacckk! How can this be pt 1 of the conclusion?! I'm so glad you're committed to finishing this story (unlike so many others), but I so can't see how you are going to wrap this up in one installment! Waiting with baited breath!
| Spikesagitta chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
Holy ****! Maura's not dead is she? But damn that was awesome Jane shooting down a helicopter!
| saoulbete chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
I hate you so much right now, it's not even funny. Seriously. Leaving this, right here? You go from the sheer awesome of Jane shooting down a helicopter to not even letting her revel in the glory of having ishot down a helicopter./i After professing love. And epic conclusion? Damn, I don't want this to end. It's just so...awesome.
| keepcalm.and.read chapter 17 . 8/1/2012
Holy shit! I can't remember if this is how I start all of my reviews, but it's definitely what I'm thinking after I read every update! I can't believe Maura was shot...I just...I don't even know where to go from here really. I can't believe it's almost over either. I need to know what happens!