Fantastic story. Absolutely great. Now excuse me while I go replay the entire trilogy again.

Man absolutely grate don't know if you are still writing but you should

I have only recently discovered the masterpiece that is Mass Effect and I fell in love with it. Tali is always my romance option and this story you have crafted gives Mass Effect 3 a proper ending.
It's been almost 12 years since you wrote this masterpiece T. Bryson, and I have no clue were you are in your life, but if ever one day decide to continue this story I will be there to read it.
Keelah Se'lai, T. Bryson Keelah Se'lai.

Wonderful, could not put it down.

Nice ending I guess though I wouldn’t have chosen Kaiden myself boring character boring backstory and not all that useful yes hes a biotic and a sentinel but you can be one too and a better one as well Ashley I know gets her criticism but she’s a hell of a lot better than Kaiden she earns her promotions while Kaiden gets them practically handed to him plus she has a better background and is better to talk and interact with. Kaiden Promoted to commander after you die promoted to major after ME3 later made a specter in ME3 Ashely on the other hand after ME only gets promoted to special operations chief and later after mass2 gets promoted to lieutenant commander in mass3 she is made a specter. Ashley has to work her ass off to get her promotions. Sorry got carried away all in all it’s a good epilogue story wish there was more side characters kasumi samara James joker Miranda jack EDI just feels kinda empty and they deserve some recognition as well. One last thing are you going to do a whole story about each game?

Incredible! You captured the essence of the characters and it was a beautiful resolution!

Thank you so much for your work T. Bryson. For me, Tali is a canonical couple for Shepard, and reading about their future fate was very pleasant and satisfying, I even cried several times during the reading :)
I will write a letter to Bioware so that they make the fate of Tali and Shepard described in your fanfiction canon.
Wish you a good day

Thank you so much for your work T. Bryson. For me, Tali is a canonical couple for Shepard, and reading about their future fate was very pleasant and satisfying, I even cried several times during the reading :)
I will write a letter to Bioware so that they make the fate of Tali and Shepard described in your fanfiction canon.
Wish you a good day.

It's 20:24 and I just finished Mass Effect Legendary addition.. Thank you for the closure that the story gave my character.

Just want to say thank you. After finishing the trilogy the first time I need this.

Nvm

10/10

Garrus doesn't win against Grunt in an arm wrestle. He is literally physical peak krogan and we have seen Wrex destroy armoured vehicles in the Citadel DLC with his bare hands, meanwhile in lore describes turians as being only somewhat stronger than humans on average. It was perfect up until that and the weirdly segmented leftist politics about "gender roles". My suspension of disbelief can only be stretched so far. I would be lying however if I didn't mention how much closure this gave the trilogy and how well written the personalities are.

8.5/10

-1.5 for the above mentioned gripes and the lack of an Ashley variant. Also a few small grammar errors. Still probably the best written fanfic I have ever seen... You have talent. Enough talent to make this old man cry. Just a shame that you let your personal bias and lack of research get in the way of creating a masterpiece.

The leftist politics about gender norms wasn't needed.

This was great and lovely. Thanks a lot for this closure!

It's 2023. I missed out on Mass Effect until this year. Was never spoiled. Fell so in love with the game. Romanced Tali and did the destroy ending and I just felt, incomplete. It was so good until that final moment. So thank you for writing such a beautiful conclusion for an epic saga. This now my unofficial cannon ending. Loved the whole story. Thank you.