Reviews for Baby Blues
GalitMirav chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
If only the show had progressed this way! I really love how you write the family dynamics between everyone. And of course, Wooden Swan :)

Better than canon. Thanks again for a great story.
Raquela chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
Oh that ending was so awesome. YOU FREAKING ROCK!
Fraulein Takoor chapter 2 . 12/19/2012
Loved it!
tinnie75 chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
All the Charming family, Geppetto family and Wooden Swan family feels in one story? You're really trying to kill us aren't you? I loved it. Even more then I love the actual show because here they got their happy ending. I'm still waiting for the Emma/Charming reunion and the little bit of him you included in this story was perfect. I can totally see him as an overprotective father. Because that's who he was the one moment he spent with Emma before sending her to our world.
I hope that in the actual show there will be some sort of twist and August ends up being Henry's father. Because that would just complete the Wooden Swan perfection.
That70sshowlova chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
I liked the first ending, but I looove this ending. Oh my God! I literally ducked my head into the comforter of my bed I was laughing so hard. I didn't want anyone to hear me, because it was obnoxiously loud. I laughed, looked up at the screen, laughed again, looked up at the screen, laughed harder. Holy shit!

Numero uno! Charming miming choking August. That was what had me in a fit of giggles. It's completely unnatural to picture, because I can't imagine him doing it, but at the same time I can, and it's hilarious! Have you ever seen Date Movie? No? Watch it! There's this one part where they're spoofing Mr. and Mrs. Smith where they're in therapy. The therapist asks them something and the male character just starts to mime all of the ways he imagined killing his wife. It seems morbid, but if you've watched the movie, or when/if you do, I'm sure you'll laugh. I kept imagining that scene, and then Charming and it was just...amazing. Funniest thing ever!

Dos! The part where she punches him in the arm because he lied. "Would you like me to go and tell him the truth? I'm sure he and your father are going to love hearing all about how I screwed you repeatedly on every surface of that motel room." Seriously funny! Not only the way you worded it, but the fact that you mentioned it. I imagined them doing it Spider-man style on the ceiling. XD

Tres! She called him a cheeky cunt. XD Who even says that?! Apparently Emma. I have to use that at some point.

Cuatro (Why do I keep counting in Spanish?) The rest of the dialogue after that. Holy fucking shit. Favorited, instantly. I'm going to go reread and laugh my ass off, if you'll excuse me.
xxXkmiXxx chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
o gosh i have to admit that not only emma and august had an amazing chemistry. . . i loved how you made of the princess the puppet and the beliver a family

i could enjoy more of these fics really C:

this goes to favs C:

oh and i love when emma call him puppet boy XD
Lover of Reid chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
That was great. Henry took the news so smoothly. I loved Prince Charmings' reaction though, he reacted like any normal father would have if they found out the man before them had knocked up his daughter. I also love how when he hears August talk about knocking Emma up again that he yells to Snow that he's going to kill him. I for one sure am relieved that he can't get to his sword. Do you have another story to follow this one?
Lover of Reid chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
That was a great start. Looking at Henry and August side by side I can see a resemblance between them. I can also see Snow White in him too. I wish that they would put this type of scenario into the show. I hope that when season 2 starts that there is some way for August to be turned back into a human being. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Nice!
Not exactly how I imagined Emma's love story going, but it was still good.
And I rather see this as a two-shot than a fic with an alternate ending, it all goes quite well together. Still wish you would write more though...like Emma's parents' reactions, the Council, all that.
Still, great fic!
Iwannabegoldnrumpeled chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
The banter between these two is cute. And they made up! :) Loved it!
evincis chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Interesting story. Quite plausible actually. I found the second chapter a little out of character but I like the concept. The first chapter is beautifully written.
SLopez chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
I've already reviewed this at livejournal, but there's no such thing as too much reviews :)

I loved the two chapters, they were sweet, funny and they gave the characters some kind of closure. And again, James being overprotective does things to me!
kelli maguire chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
I really loved both endings.. I like how august is all talking dirty to her and everything. Lol. I also always love seeing some august/henry love :) tnks girl
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Awesome, perfect, incredible,amazing...ect. Long story short, I adore this ending...and the trio reuniting is just heartbreaking...seriously...drowning in a sea of emotions is so sweet. YOU WRITE SO WELL! And Henry...oh god he's so adorable! Always waiting for your next story about our beloved Auggie! UPDATE ASAP!
PS:thank you for sharing with the world your fantastic stories!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
OOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGGG! I LOOOOVVVEEE IT! AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS! AUGUST and EMMA...AND...AUGUST and HENRY...why it can't happen in the show too? why? WHY! WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH ALL THIS AUGUST FEELS NOW?
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