Reviews for Snow Wolf in the Shadow
LordOfTheWest chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
This is very cute! It is a lot like beauty and the beast! At least the concept. I hope to see more of this soon
Luna Goddess of the Night chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
Not really too much to say at the moment. There are a few punctuation errors. Mainly in the comma area. You have a few sentences, that would look better with commas, to separate your run-ons with. And you misspelt a word. The domain you were looking for is spelt "Elysion", not how you spelt it before.

Can't really pick out a good or fav part yet. But you might want to mention that this is AU, so people don't get confused. I'll keep an eye on this story, with more concrit in the future.

-Luna