Reviews for A New Chapter of Their Lives
Kagomae chapter 7 . 1/29/2014
I love how detailed this story is. Very well done. But one thing I will recommend is that you do a spell check on your words for example: "serge" is a strong material used for clothing while "sarge" would be a short way of saying sergeant. Just be sure to double check words that don't seem correct. Take care!
jneill7677 chapter 30 . 1/12/2014
One small piece of constructive criticism: the FBI is in America. Canada has CSIS.
jneill7677 chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
That is so funny. I am just starting to read your story. I am writing my own story, and I have the team (the guys anyway) going to O'Malley's Bar and Grill every Friday. I promise I didn't read yours first!
megz04 chapter 46 . 11/23/2012
This story was really well written. I'm going to write one review for the whole story!
I spent a lot of time over the last two days reading this story (I was even reading it at work on my phone during my down time) You did a really great job introducing Zoe into the team and buildign relationships between her and the rest of the team. I loved how her romance started with Greg and the friendships you introduced between Zoe, Ed and Spike.
You definitely included the perfect amout of drama, humour and romance. Thanks for sharing this story, you did a really excellent job! Can't wait to read to read more of your writing. :)
A.S. Nightbird chapter 45 . 10/28/2012
Loved this story! It's nice to see someone write Greg-centric stories, since most of the stories posted in this fandom are Sam/Jules. While I like them both, I prefer to read Greg, Ed, Spike, and Wordy-centric stories.

I thought you did a good job developing the characters' personalities. They all felt three-dimensional. My only complaint is that it would have been nice to have physical descriptions of them, such as hair color, height, etc. It's really easy to weave that into the action. I did feel that Dean was written a bit out of character, but it was fairly easy to overlook.

I also liked the way you worked your native language into the story. Very clever! And it didn't feel at all forced.

I look forward to reading more Flashpoint stories that you write. Please keep writing!
garb50 chapter 45 . 9/17/2012
Yes! You brought it to an end - a nice one and we can go on dreaming. It was nice to read and review it. Surely you will go on writing (and I will reading).
fireandice1986 chapter 45 . 9/16/2012
Awwww man noooooooooo I can't believe ur ending it :( you so need to do a sequel and bring dean back to meet his little brother, also want to see spikes reaction to Zoƫ including him in her babies. Soooooo pretty please do a sequel :D if you don't that's ok tooo this was an awesome way to end it.
fireandice1986 chapter 44 . 9/16/2012
Awwww such an awesome chapter love the different part of the honeymoon.

The last part of this chapter was awesome . Love that she changed her name to parker.
dawnpritchard66 chapter 45 . 9/16/2012
wow what a great ending .
its brilliant
congrats xxx
Alicat1165 chapter 45 . 9/16/2012
Perfect ending! :)
Zombiegirl242 chapter 45 . 9/16/2012
Woot! Grey's anatomy rule! You HAVE to make a sequel, maybe one about how Greg and Zoe's boy grows up? I mean, this story is too amazing and awesome to end! Plz oh plz oh plz make a sequel! Plz update soon! And by update I mean the sequel? :)
garb50 chapter 44 . 9/15/2012
Some very nice scenes. Love the vows, so funny. And a honeymoon out of the honeymoon catalog.
Zombiegirl242 chapter 44 . 9/15/2012
Wow, amazing chapter! REALLY awesome job on the honeymoon! Now, I wonder what will be next... Plz update soon! :)
Dawnpritchard66 chapter 44 . 9/15/2012
Hi what a lovely ending to a great story xx
Alicat1165 chapter 44 . 9/15/2012
Very nice! :)
Loved it all :)
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