Reviews for How to Win Friends, Influence People |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() well,shit,but i guess that works |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I'm just gonna give up now, this was garbage |
![]() ![]() ![]() These OCs are lame as hell |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally, I think Konoha would be even more feared. They have a Jinchuuriki who has technically founded religion/cult that canonizes Jinchuuriki. I would think every village with one is going to be terrified of it spreading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's Talk no Jutsu is so strong he immediately broke the Kiri nin's no speak policy xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() They paid Naruto for protection racket and he took "protection" literally oh my God xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! Thanks for writing and for the recap on the characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it bugs me when authors refer to naruto like he's konohas property |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sooo good! It was absolutely hilarious, yet completely plausible for Naruto's life/luck XD I really hope that you are able to finish the sequel! I want to see Tomomi reunited with Deidara T.T And it'll be interesting to see how everything snowballs in regards to everything else :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bahahahaha! XD I'm laughing like a freaking loon at work! Those last two lines...just *chef's kiss* brilliant! I love that Naruto is sooo oblivious to what's happening around him...and yet observant enough to really make a change. The juxtaposition is beautifully done! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't logged in to ffnet in years, but I have done so today to tell you just how much this story means to me. I keep going back to it time after time, so much so that lines from it randomly pop into my head (and make me smile every time they do). Everything here is so heartfelt and kind and emotional and occasionally hilarious, and love (of all sorts) wins out in the end! I adore the different perspectives and intertwining plotlines and flashbacks, and I think this format of short sections with different titles works so well for the flow of the narrative - plus it's so unique, I've never seen this format used for a single full story before. Going in for another reread now, and this time I will be commenting as I go! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very funny! Definitely worth a read. |