Reviews for The Greatest of All These
SCBranam1 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
WOW...if it takes waiting for another chapter, and they are like this one...then make us wait! Just watch the spelling...a few of the words looked like they couldn't get on paper fast enough-last letter missing-which could be the computer...but it's all good! Keep working with I said before, can't wait for the next chapter...VERY NICE...follows the storyline well...and the POV writing is very easy on the eyes and the brain!
Namiad chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
awesome short story! you seem to have captured the depth of Jessica's feelings for both Hoyt and Jason, an the torment she feels all at the same time