Reviews for Loki Black
TheBlackSeaReaper chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
looooooooooooooooooooooooove it a lot. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work. update soon please.
pipper11 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Great start, lot of possibilities!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Excellent idea - particularly loved the kick in the pants and the idea that the Veil somehow judges and sends its victims? inhabitants? on to some fate other than death should they be innocent/worthy.

Regressing Sirius and throwing him back to Harry's first year was a very nice touch!

Although I wonder when Returned!Sirius will think about Present!Sirius still being in Azkaban... and just what effect the realization will have on him. Does he slowly let slip certain facts he "discovered" at Gringotts to Harry and Draco - starting with Sirius being Harry's godfather, and is their a magical significance to that here? - and leading to his "father"s innocence later; perhaps writing and having the Goblins aging a letter, then sealing it in Gringotts for later "discovery" to publicize who the real Secret Keeper was?

Setting Hermione, Draco, and Ron in different Houses is good; wondering how he'll set up a meet between Harry and Hermione now, as they won't be having classes with the 'Claws... or will they?... AND I WANT A HARRY/HERMIONE ROMANCE DEVELOPING, DAGNABIT!...

...{ahem} Sorry about that...

Now that the Twin terrors know who two of the Marauders were, will they and Loki get Harry - and maybe Draco, help get more of Lucius' brain washing out of'em - in on their pranks? Be a good way to increase his confidence and , just how did the M.O.B. take the changes of two of his tools? 'Cause I think he was set on using Ron as a Gryffindor tool to keep Harry down and as a spy while Draco would've been expected to be as in canon, a Slytherin foil for Albus' Weapon to think he was improving against.

And as a Black, wouldn't Loki/Sirius know of some subtle ways to purge Binns from this plane of existence? Be hilarious if he did; Binns comes in, starts roll call, gets hit and start going 'Oh my, I seem to be dead... what's that bright light? MUM?' before the school loses the second worse teacher on staff... Trelawney runs a far distant third, as her class isn't mandatory nor even offered until much later. And Albus' head continues to expand from internal rage and frustration, having to locate a new History teacher so suddenly on top of the disruption of his perfect plans...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
wow, really looking forward to this one!
This Star Won't Go Out chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Excellent excellent idea. I love it. Amazingly done. Plus I love how you made Draco a Gryffindor. (just don't leave out Hermione and Neville in your story because they are really good friends for Harry)
karthik9 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I LOVE IT! So fricking funny!
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