Reviews for The 3 Keys of OZ
Michael chapter 5 . 2/1/2017
This is a great story and also wonderful chapters too! I love it and like it a lot! I can't wait for more chapters or so to come! I'm looking forward to reading them! But please take your time with it and don't rush :)
Mi-Chan chapter 5 . 3/3/2016
HEY GUYS I DEBUNKED THE THEORY OF DA HANGING MUNCHKIN! :D it turns out the person that reported the video had used either 3DS or Photoplay to display the image because notice how the hanging munchkin didnt blend in with the scenery because if it was real then it would have been more difficult to see oh and by the way 3Ds and Photoplay are both photoshopping programs but the function differently, also if anyone in the movie on the set had commited suicide or murdered someone then the director would have seen it and the filming crew would have been alerted to take the hanger down from the tree and have them cremated or something so sorry's fake. that's all I'm gonna say. man, who the hell comes up with this fake sh*t in the first place?
Guest chapter 5 . 12/6/2015
Azkadela chapter 5 . 9/27/2015
please please please update I am loving this
RATNMR7 chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
So far so good. You got a real good story here. Though, try to work harder on the grammar. But, again, reall good job. Keep it up.
Count Mallet chapter 5 . 1/10/2015
Just so you know, a “chapter” consisting of just an announcement (as you did for chapter five) is technically against the site's rules. What you could do, instead, is delete that chapter, and add the announcement to the beginning of the present chapter six (which would then become chapter five).

Also, you may want some way to distinguish between your comments and story content. Some authors boldface their opening/closing comments. Others use the vertical line available in the chapter editor. Some, will use a centered symbol such as * or # to mark the transition between notes and the story proper. This also helps make it easier to read chapters.

As for the chapter, it appears our main characters are still a bit awestruck with being in the land of Oz. Given that any teen would probably react in disbelief to news that they were now in a magical and mystical fairy land, I think you handled the main them of the chapter very well.

Also, you did a great job using italics to represent thoughts. The only small thing—something I recently discovered myself—is that one doesn't need quotes for enclosing thoughts because they aren't actual dialog. It surprised me, too, but ever since I learned this, I started using that with my own writing.

At the end, you could probably eliminate the “(Somewhere in Oz)” tag and begin the next paragraph with “Elsewhere, a soft gentle voice said, “The Prophecy is coming together.” I know it's tricky to pull off changing points of view and do so effectively (one of my first stories did that before I chose to rewrite it in third person), but integrating the change right into the text is very effective for the readers.

To answer your question, I believe the person in question is Glinda or perhaps a descendent or her successor if she is no longer living. I'll be curious to see who it is once you have time to write the next chapter.

Finally, I'm glad you had time to resume this story. The Oz categories on here don't get much attention in terms of stories and readership. I wrote a small crossover in the Books»Oz Series section this fall. Even though it wasn't read all that much, I still enjoyed writing it and don't regret it one bit. In turn, I hope you can have fun with the rest of this story.

- Count Mallet -

PS: I'm not sure what you use for writing your chapters (MS Office, Open Office, etc.), but those usually have options for checking grammar. Just be careful, though. Sometimes spell/grammar check make recommendations that wouldn't make sense, especially with proper names.
Count Mallet chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
I'm glad to see you update. I happened to notice a response to one of my reviews and I think I've figured out who Kay's grandfather is, especially with what might have been a hint here. But don't worry, I won't say it here so I don't spoil it for anyone else.

I wonder what will happen to Kay & her friends in Oz. I'm sure Kay has no idea what to expect and her friends will probably freak out some. I can only hope her jewel has powers to help or protect her as well.

I hope you are able to update soon.

- Count Mallet -
A Fan Of Oz chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
I think you're doing very well as far as writing my dear. I would though and I've had people tell me this a lot my entire life too with writing. Check your grammar and spelling.
I've been reading this since you put it up and I'm enjoying it immensely.
Keep going with it. You're doing very well.
Dark Gotham chapter 3 . 6/3/2013
First, I do like this story but it's sort of hard to read and fallow. I'd like to see it beta read if at all possible , 'cause you do have a good story going on. I hope that you are able to continue it some point in the future, it is good and very promising.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/29/2013
You shud def. finesh it. It's asumm
AmethystRose95 chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
Ok so to Count Mallet I will do corrections once i finish this story which will be quite awhile, since i am planing to have more than 20 and yes i have gave hints on who is Kay's grandfather, look back on ch 2 and part of ch 3 when Kay is describing her nightmare. But thank you for the help i very appreciated but until i finish on what i want to write for the rest of my story i won't do much of my corrections until then. Thank you :)
Count Mallet chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
I was glad to see an update to this story. I'm a bit busier this Spring, but I'm trying to catch up on my reading.

One thing I noticed is mixed tense with verbs. If you write a paragraph in past tense, all the verbs should be in the past as well. Similarly, for a paragraph in the present tense, all the verbs should be in the present tense. Mixing the two together can make the reading a bit awkward.

Also, try to remember what I said in my last review about dialogue. Starting a new paragraph when someone else speaks makes it a lot easier for readers to know who says what.

That said, I'm glad to see the plot advance. I am very curious who Kay's grandfather is. I'm not sure if you've already dropped a hint or if the man's identity is yet to be revealed.

- Count Mallet -
natty.buck.1 chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
Yay!its really gr8!
grapejuice101 chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
I love it. More updates ASAP please.
AmethystRose95 chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
Wow i been getting a few favs here and i thank u guys for doing that. I am working on ch 3 its almost half done so probably might be done by the end of this month or next month ok :)
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