Reviews for Poor, Pathetic Peter
Simone chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Fabulous portrayal of his inner emotions. I love that you took the time to really write out his feelings and thinking and inner emotions. His experiences that made him what he is and influenced his choices. Very thought provoking; you have really expanded his character. Very nice job.
lucyjoan chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Wow, so good. I actually really like Peter as a character (not for what he did, but because I agree with you in that he's more complex than people give him credit for) and I think you did a really good job portraying how he moved to Voldy's side after being overshadowed one too many times.
Xterker23 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
russia-the-second chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
woah. this is very good... i liked how you portrayed peter as the outcast of the Marauders. very nice :)