Reviews for Til it's Gone
Crow's Talon chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
I love the way you write the relationship between Harvey and Gilda here - you nail the personalities of both characters, and I especially love the way you write Harvey. The dialogue between them is realistic, flows very well, and I love the way you get into the minds and emotions of the characters. I especially love the language between Harvey and Gilda, which fits them both so well. The use of time adds a lot to this piece, and there's a real feel of loss and pain here as Harvey's and Gilda's lives change. All the little details add up beautifully - I especially liked the encyclopedia and the books that Gilda reads.

Congratulations - this is an excellent story and a great read. I really enjoyed it.
No Longer in Operation chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
maybe she just wore the ring to get people off her back?
Gary chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Dear Lord, was that sad. And beautiful. I love your snarky, violent "Squishykins" stories, then you write something like this, that grabs you right in the heart. Thank you.
jokergirl4ever chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I love love looove it! Thats was so great and heartbreakimg at times.

Great story!
Dextra2 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Cool