|Reviews for training camp romance|
| rommymaya.b.jonas chapter 7 . 7/14/2013
update plaese! .(:)
| B.Julia chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
no hate but i dislike the way you write, it to compact and it has no breathing space.
also the way you write is sloppy.
you should check yor chapters aft leat 2 times before uploading them
this is just tips to get better :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/2/2013
Bad writing. Bad grammar. REALLY bad characterization.
I'm no Tomoka fan, but I really HATE it when writers, Sakuno-writers specifically, make her look really bad for the sake of making the reader sympathize with oh so poor , little, innocent Sakuno-chan. -_-;
It's irritating. She's Sakuno's best friend for pete' sake! She supports Sakuno. She may be loud and too hyper for her own good most of the time, but I doubt she'll get mad and jealous at her friend because of such trivial things.
And please don't throw the 'this is fanfiction' crap. I know it is, but if you're not going to stick with the character's true personalities, you might as well make EVERYONE in this fanfic OCs.
| michelle88222 chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
Poor Andro. She's had a pretty hard past T_T . But Sakuno and Andro seem to be getting along with each other!
| michelle88222 chapter 6 . 5/30/2013
Andro seems quite protective of Sakuno. I hope they get along with each other and DAMN YOU TOMOKA! T_T She's so mean...in this story... o.O It's been a while but please update!
| Yaoishipper4eva chapter 5 . 12/1/2012
I wanna see Tezuka's onee-san will she get along with Sakuno? will she be as strict with everyone but kind to Sakuno? Who will be with Sakuno in the next chappie?
| unknown chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
TOMOKA is a JEALOUS, INSECURE B****!
Anyway, I really LIKE SAKUNOxOTHERS pairing (EXCEPT Ryoma) though MY FAVORITE is TEZUxSAKU, it's different and unique (captain and cheerleader, confident and shy)...
I like your story, please update and continue. I'll look forward to your next installment. Good luck. :3
| Unknown chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
what do you think of a tezuxsaku pairing?
| Mistress Hydrangea chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Kyaaaaa! Die and rot in hell Tomoka! That girl makes me so mad! Grrrr, I look forward to the next chapter! And awwwwhhh, Fuji was so cute! :3 I hope the next chappie is with either Yukimura Seiichi or Shiraishi Kuranosuke! Update when you can! Love it!
Mistress Hydrangea :3
| Avery chapter 3 . 7/24/2012
Kunimitsu - Name
Masaharu - Name
I really like Sakuno x everyone (but NOT Ryoma :P) and I'm happy that you write story like this. :)
| Sacchiance chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Ooh, this chapter is Niou's time to shine. So Tooyama Kintaro and Niou Masaharu have their time, I wonder who's next. Please update soon. -
| Mistress Hydrangea chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
Wow that was cute! I hope I see more of Rikkai Dai (Yukimura Seiichi) and Shitenhouji (Shiraishi Kuranosuke) I loved it! So update again soon!
-Mistress Hydrangea :3
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2012
I really think you should get a beta or something. You have a lot tl fix, but it's a good plot.
| Sacchiance chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I wish to read more. - So make it happen! :P Kidding, but seriously, I want to read more. Peace out and Good lucks!
| Mistress Hydrangea chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like it, but you need to type it properly. I like the concept of the story and it is good, but you should get a beta reader before you post it. There are grammar and spelling errors. I love Sakuno-centric stories as I am writing one myself. Update when you can, I look forward to it! I dislike Ryoma, so hopefully he won't be in the way, and its Shitehouji. Sorry I had to point that out! If you need any help, I would love to of some assistance! I hope I'm not being harsh or anything, I'm sorry if I am! If you want I could fix up your chapters for you before you post them? Its just a suggestion. Good luck with your story, and update soon!
Mistress Hydrangea :3