Reviews for Getting Close
Hello chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Wow more depressing than both endings.
nobody important chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Sad stuff
macabre-fantasies chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I liked this, I was hoping the wedding guests' reaction would've been more shocked since two people died, nevertheless I still enjoyed reading this, great piece!
Foopar chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Is it bad that I got a bit of a chuckle out of this? I mean, first Roman is murdered by a stray bullet, then literally RIGHT AFTER Niko says this day could not get any worse, Pegorino comes along and takes out Kate. Literally just one right after the other, lol.

Very good for your first fanfic, I got a legitimate gasp at the end, when Niko took up that shotgun... only problem I can see is you pretty much combined both endings and left it at that. I was looking for something actually DIFFERENT to happen, but this was a nice one shot either way.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This is really good!