Reviews for Betrayal
JoyScott13 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Hey, this is really good! Poor Hal!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Poor Hal! Seriously, being choked by his baby bro while his girlfriend stood by watching... that's going to seriously mess a person up.

My only con/crit is that Glass wouldn't have any way of knowing that Ben was the one who choked Hal or that Karen was watching (since they were alone on the roof at that point)... not unless they have cameras watching the roof and I don't think the generator's got power for that. ;) If you just changed one sentence to say that Hal explained what had happened and then pretended to drift off to sleep, that would make sense. :)
Qwertyuiop chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Love it! You should make another ;)
Loredana chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Hi! Before all,i must say in Italy we are at 2x04 so..Spoiler:D and i'm very happy of it!
I really like your story! I'm looking forward for others!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Love it:)
Sirnonenath chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I needed this tag after the episode. What broke my heart the most about 206 was the fact that it was Ben himself (not Skitter controlled Ben or spikes-glowing Ben) that attacked Hal. :(

Great job with showing just how hurt Hal was that his own brother did this to him. And Tom... *cries*. He must feel his family is falling apart. I really felt for him too.

Thank you for this. I hope the show fixes the Masons soon.