Reviews for Fault and Forgiveness
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
Great little tale this. Like the way Friedrich speaks his mind & prods the Captain to go after Maria. Also that Georg joins Maria to pray for forgiveness at the end is quite sweet. Hope you write more like this, would like to read a few longer versions even.
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Great stuff. I like the way it turned out.
utility - singer chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Very sweet. This has a lot of potential to be expanded.
BettiAnn chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I think it's beautiful. Its simple and sweet without an overload of mush. Well done.
kitcat19us chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
great story!
pussycatwithattitude chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I thought this was great, it was really interesting to see the different situation and how the Captain reacted to that. Their conversation about forgiveness felt so real, especially when he managed to catch her on the bus and mentioned his late wife and his lack of faith since. I can't wait to see what else you might write in the future.
Bellarsam Chrisjulittle chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I really liked this one-shot, very in character and very well-written. I hope to see more from you in this forum!
som04 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I like this, it was interesting to read. and a great idea to have, lovely written, and hope you do come back to do more. :):):):)