|Reviews for GB Plus Me Pt 5: It's About Time|
| Donna Smith chapter 1 . 1/4
| Sara chapter 14 . 10/11/2013
Terrific job so far
| deepfathom chapter 14 . 10/3/2013
DUUUUUUDE! I swear this gets better and better every single time I read it. Holy cow, how do you come up with these things? Brilliance!
(And by the way, sorry I haven't got around to reading this until now. My stupid email hasn't been getting fan fiction notifications to me.)
| deepfathom chapter 13 . 8/28/2013
Whoa! Didn't see that one coming! Very nicely done ;)
| deepfathom chapter 12 . 7/22/2013
Wow, this is getting intense!
Bravo! Another fantastic chapter! Keep it up, girl!
| deepfathom chapter 11 . 6/4/2013
Whoa! That was intnse. Even before this chapter, I was thinking this story had a sort of Walking Dead vibe to it. Pretty cool :)
| deepfathom chapter 10 . 6/1/2013
Wow. Just wow. Not many teens can write such a unique and engaging story like this, even if it is a fan fiction. Your characters are very well-developed and easy for us to relate with and like. I LOVE them! And I admit, I'm a little jealous of how simple and uncomplicated you've made Jen's narrative. It's not wordy or overdone or "explain-y", but we still get a perfect idea of exactly what's going on inside her head. That's something I struggle with a lot. You've definitely found her voice and that's a big, big thing when it comes to character development! Awesome!
And the plot is really cool, I have to say. I've missed reading this, so I'm glad you're done with school and writing it again! Woohoo! I have stuff to read again! :D
| deepfathom chapter 9 . 6/1/2013
Oh yayyyy! I'm so excited to see where this is going to go. It's a really great story and I love it. It's just getting more intersting and intrigueing so good job! Keep it up! :)
| deepfathom chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
Oooh! Nice! I've definitely gotta see what happens. This is just getting better and better! Great job :)
| NrdyGrl chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
Oh my God, I'm such a jacka**! I didn't even check to see if you had updated since, like, December.
Anyway, on to the important stuff. Right, the vibe I'm getting is Ghostbusters meets The Walking Dead with a dash of X-Men and Percy Jackson thrown in. Now, that might not make sense (I'm part of wayyy too many fandoms), but it's because I'm frustratingly confused (only because I think of myself as relatively intelligent and I can't figure this out) and extremely intrigued. I can't wait to see what happens next.
So glad your back. I'll have to start checking your stuff more regularly again.
| NrdyGrl chapter 4 . 11/29/2012
I haven't looked at your story in a while (bad me, I'm sorry, I'll punish myself later) but you can't just stop there. I absolutely can't stand not knowing where a story is going, and I know trying to write in that position is difficult, but you've piqued my interest. I sincerely hope you finish, but you were right to sit back and take a break if you were stuck.
Hope to see more within the next couple of months. I promise you I will continue reading as long as keep writing.
| deepfathom chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
Oh, and btw, I love the PKE iPhone app. Brilliant! :D literally made me laugh out loud!
| deepfathom chapter 5 . 11/3/2012
You know what? I'm thinking along the same lines with my own story, so you're not alone. Shoot me a PM if ya need to talk about it! Seriously!
| NrdyGrl chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
I don't know what happened, but FF whacked out. Anyway, I was skimming through my science notes and found the actual (or close to actual) statistics for DS.
Women 29 or under have approximately a 17% chance of having a child w/ DS.
Women 30-34 have approximately a 25% chance.
Women 35-39 have approximately a 35% chance.
Women 40 have approximately a 40-50% chance.
These statistics are from early 2011, so they may not be 100% accurate, but they're close enough where no one should complain.
I think I know what's going to happen. Going all the way back to 1984 is going to make it difficult. . . I should keep my mouth shut. Anyway, can't wait for more. Sorry for any confusion.
| purenonsense chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
And now the fun begins!
BTW, I love Mother Time! She exactly the kind of person I would want being in charge of time.