Reviews for Meltdown
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Okay...another author wrote a Melissa telling off Abby scene in her story several years back-this kind of reminded me of it. Hers was SO much better...

No offense, but several of your stories remind me of other ones already published...but yours usually aren't as grammatically or logically on par with theirs...

Just saying, you seem to plagiarize a bit (consciously or not) yourself and you often come across as too young to be writing some of the things you attempt.
EmilieHenderson99 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
this is really good! i used to LOVE Flight 29 Down, especially Jackson, or Cody haha...whichever you want to actually call him LOL. I wish they still put the show on! But anywaysm this was awesome. I love for a change Melissa decided to speak her mind...I also like how you added Abby to the cast as well; some people tend to forget about her. Overall this was really good and I can't wait to read more from you!
bornatexasgirl chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like it...Lord knows she never defended herself or anyone else in the series, about time Melissa stood up for herself!