Reviews for Further Mutations
chimera629 chapter 7 . 3/28
does he still have access to his dads train car lab or connors sewer lab
chimera629 chapter 6 . 3/28
wtf is wrong with them dont they know non lawyer visits are monitored
wow his dad is alive and an evil ahole still wanna know how theyre keeping the meta contained though
chimera629 chapter 5 . 3/28
wtf why didnt he just change at her house since he has cloths in his bag and why didnt she go with him to his house he just wasting time.
hm didnt see that coming and if she has the power to stop spider man i wonder why she hasnt figured out away to take them out
chimera629 chapter 4 . 3/28
wow he needs to learn that just as he risk he life for others that others can do the same for him and be able to accept the consequence
he needs to learn to listen and look learn what personal responsibity is or martry since it truly isnt his responsibility and if he feel he has to help people he could do it with his mind or join the police or fire department or paramedics then it truly would be his responsibility/duty and he would get paid for it
chimera629 chapter 3 . 3/28
why didnt he and gwen go straight to connors after school
chimera629 chapter 2 . 3/28
have to he needs to learn to take care of himself and loved ones first
chimera629 chapter 1 . 3/28
why wouldnt he take the gun from the guy and web him,why would the guy shoot the girl and how could the guy see his eye color?
Jokul Frosti The Winter Child chapter 7 . 3/28
MythologyStar chapter 2 . 3/28
I can't really imagine Andrew Garfield with red eyes...
*Shrugs* Then again, I was never really much of a visual person...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/16/2015
I'm dying here, you left such a cliff hanger! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! !
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
I wrote before saying I was like you, I forgot to elaborate. I am also a girl and also read that really long Wikipedia page about Spiderman. I've read only one comic. You've inspired me to write fan fiction as well!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/14/2015
I love love love the story! I'm like you, I just got into Spiderman and think he's the best thing ever! Please please write more.
Somebody knows chapter 6 . 8/25/2014
Please update soon!
JackFrost-300-TrueFrost chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
cool liking story so far really do!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
Hmmm... I'm not sure... If this ' Richard Parker ' is Peter's dad then I do not think i'll like it that much... Still, the mutation parts pretty good.
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