Reviews for My Diary
cherryredxx chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I'm not sure of how old you are, but this story makes you appear very young. The characterizations were nowhere near adequate, particularly not for the time period. It's not at all realistic that Cassiopeia Black would say, "my boyfriend is sooo handsome," and this story was absolutely riddled with spelling and grammar errors. I don't mean to be harsh, although I realize I am being a bit, but when you submit a piece for a competition, you should expect that, and I really don't feel like any real effort was put into this.
Bhaerette chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Hahaha "can't we behead her like the house elves"? Nice! My only problem with this is
I wish you had written more. Very nice!
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Short and interesting, but a bit short. Keep writing