|Reviews for A True Champion|
| howmanyisthat chapter 5 . 9/20
why stop there
| Mistletainn chapter 5 . 9/7
...I haven't given up on this story either. Hope you'll update soon, at least before the year is over.
| Please update chapter 5 . 8/27
PLEASE UPDATE. MY NAME IS PLEASE UPDATE AND I GO AROUND TELLING PEOPLE TO UPDATE. UPDATE, PLEASE
| mfmxxx chapter 5 . 8/12
Its a great story. Just read through again. So, the three starter pokemon, Pikachu and Lapras/Snorlax/Aerodactyl? Imagine Red with megaEvo, that would be a bit overkill. haha.
| SkywardStrike chapter 5 . 8/4
Well, there goes another great unfinished story. Sad, really.
What a great portrayal of Red though. Its hard to make a character with little to no dialogue this interesting, but you managed it. It's very easy to just make this kind of character a perfect hero, but Red is definitely not that. He is just the best, but other than that, he really doesn't have much going for him. He can't socialize, he can barely talk, he is paranoid about his own fame...he is a flawed character, but that, side by side with the perfect light in which the media more than likely painted him at in the Pokemon world, really makes him interesting.
The way the pokemon world has changed from the events of Red's time are also very much interesting. Great world building with the way the gyms work with different teams being used for different people depending on their number of badges makes for interesting battles, the indigo league tournament was also a great addition, the references spread out for events such as Black and White are also quite interesting, and that's just some of the stuff I saw in this five chapters
There is not that much plot going for here, nothing that special, but this seems to be a very much character driven story at least so far, though you did introduce the possibility for more to happen in the future...well, that is, if the story hadn't been seemingly discontinued.
I guess I can only hope you'll return to this concept one day, until then, its just a shame you decided to leave it behind.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/31
Argh please update this is an awesome story
| Zen chapter 1 . 7/23
Will you still continue this? It sounds promising and out of all mt. Silver fic this is the best one. Please continue
| the lone warrior chapter 5 . 7/6
Easily one of the best pokemon fanfics I've ever read. Stumbled upon it a year or two ago and super bummed that you haven't updated. It's a great story that deserves completion!
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/19
Okay now that definitely crosses the line with contemplating the murder of a gym leader's Pokemon. Red is coming across as a sociopath obsessed with winning and brutalizing his opponents. Earlier he was just socially awkward, now he looks like he's got severe mental issues. I hope Pikachu steps in to fry his ass and teach him some kind of restraint/compassion. Hopefully someone will give him some kind of penalty for this reprehensible behavior. Ash may be a moronic idiot but he's displayed more compassion and respect for life than Red.
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/10
Nooo! Don't kill Raichu! Where are you Pikachu?! When are you going to update this fanfic?!
| kuroyuki chapter 5 . 5/9
Goddamnit, i'm curous what happened next it such a good story and the red juat so cool and then he try to kill uhh...
Wait you never update this again?! Please update!
| pokegabert chapter 5 . 4/27
when willyou post ch. 6 don't leave it hanging
| edawg626 chapter 5 . 3/15
| King Rocket chapter 5 . 3/11
I find it funny that the last line is "I haven't given up on this story", and that was on 2013.
| Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne chapter 3 . 3/2
Want me to tell you another reason Espeon was there?
In the manga, Red had a eevee that could at will transform into Vaporeon, Flareon, and Jolteon.
But it evolved into Espeon and lost that ability.
That's the reason he had Espeon and not Lapras in Gen II. In Heart Gold, I was almost annoyed he had a Lapras, but then I remembered you were given one freely, so I relented.
Which reminds me.
Is he gonna get the Lapras back?