Reviews for Remain Mortal
zigra chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I like Sarevok words ) it's a pleasure to think about all three of them, with Gwen and Imoue, like loving siblings. After the end it doesn't seem to matter who wanted whom to be dead... everything is in the past.
xx Twilight Princess xx chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Beautiful story :)
Blue-Inked Frost chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Nice take on this dramatic moment in-game! I think all the characters in this group came across quite strongly even in the short piece and especially you characterised your Bhaalspawn enough to make her sympathetic to the reader. I'd find it easier to read if you used British typographical quotes, "" around speech, but that's okay. I liked reading this moment with Anomen.