Reviews for The Family Winchester
FanfictionByA chapter 44 . 8/5/2013
TEARS! SO MANY TEARS! I read this story in two days because it drew me in so much. One question {I cant remember] the fortune cookie at the end isn't that the one dean read out? AND THA'S WHY IM CRYING! Now, if you excuse me, I'm going to go read the second book. thumbs up for this story!
Lisa chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
Hey, I'm only on chapter 10 but I'm Really Enjoying your story! I like the fluffy parts especially. Great job!
sweetkiwi604 chapter 44 . 11/7/2012
NO NO NO NO! I want to read the sequel like now, I can't believe this story is over! Absolutely loved this chapter it was so sad! Very Sam move avoiding saying goodbye and the smudge at the end of cas's signature as if he was crying when he signed the papers was such an amazing touch! I can't wait to find out who she met up with at the end! Please post the sequel soon before I go through Max withdrawals ;)
CC-R2000 chapter 44 . 11/7/2012
Damn that sounds good... Can't wait for the second part! :)
xoloveJBox chapter 44 . 11/6/2012
The...the last chapter? No! I needed time to ready myself for this! Like 6 months! What am I supposed to do now?! :'(
How am I supposed to tell you how amazing this was? I can't think of any adaquate words to describe how good you are at story-telling, and I'd like to tell you how incredible this has been! I've gone through soooo many emotions since I started reading this, and you made it so I could perfectly imagine every situation, every feeling, every thought that any of them had. You took popular, well known characters and made them your own, and that in itself is a feat to be applauded. I can't believe Sam and Dean just let her go! But at the same time, I can completely understand why they did what they did, and the fact that it was so in character for them both. I'm crying so hard right now haha I also love the ending! I think it was so clever how this could easily be it, but at the same time, it isn't so definite that you couldn't carry on if you wanted to. That's some seriously smart writing right there :D
YESYESYESYES! Please let me know when you post Part 2 if you do decide to do one! I'm pretty sure I've said this before (and if I haven't, I should have!) but your writingperfection, every single time!
Eagerly anticipating whatever comes next...
sweetkiwi604 chapter 43 . 11/4/2012
So many things to say about this amazing chapter! Love how Sam had something to say about Chris but he didn't go over board, it was a very Sam thing to do if that makes sense. Love the twist about how Chris knew John! Oh and I got scared for a second I thought Dean and Sam really were dead and she really was going to take their place! Great suspense! Can not wait for more! Amazing chapter my love!
AssFaDayzzz chapter 43 . 11/4/2012
upload soon! .. it was great! :D
CC-R2000 chapter 43 . 11/4/2012
You did exactly what I was hoping for with the clown! xD
Best chapter yet, really. It's my new 'favorite chapter'!
xoloveJBox chapter 43 . 11/3/2012
Garr! I feel so conflicted! I love Cas, but this Chris guy seems like he's going to be interesting (and I totally didn't see the whole him being a hunter too thing coming) and now I JUST DON'T KNOW!
I really thought that Max was going to agree to go with that Nixie thing, and Oh my Life! I believed it for a minute when it said that Sam and Dean were dead! Nice bit of suspense there :D
"Moose-like splendor" LOL
AHHH I really want to know what they're hiding!
Once again, lovely job :)
Waiting (very very impatiently haha) for another chapter!
Christina chapter 43 . 11/3/2012
Good Job
xoloveJBox chapter 42 . 11/2/2012
I love how happy Max seems to be at the moment, she really deserves it :D I loled so hard when Dean sat on her haha I don't know why, but that seems to be a big-sibling-y thing to do, I know I do it a lot haha x I also liked how Max described Dean as 'my guard dog' I think that really sums up Dean perfectly. There were so many moments that were just so...ordinary! I mean, nothing Sam, Dean and Max do is ordinary, so with the moments like Dean sitting on Max, and Max calling Sam and Weenie, just... *happy sigh* lol (So yeah, I didn't mean ordinary in a bad way lol)
I'm really sad that you're wrapping this story up :( But if you did write another Max story, you know of at least one person who'll be drinking it up!
Once again, great chapter. I don't know how you do it.
Can't wait for another!
AssFaDayzzz chapter 42 . 10/29/2012
upload soon! :D
sweetkiwi604 chapter 42 . 10/29/2012
So many things I liked about this chapter I don't even know where to start! Like when Dean sat on her lap, or when she talked to John! Or having Dean say out loud that he loves her! Cant wait to read more!
CC-R2000 chapter 42 . 10/29/2012
Cool... Sooo: We got a prank war here I'm hoping? :)
CC-R2000 chapter 41 . 10/25/2012
'They're trying to make a fashion statement' xD Even I wouldn't say that and IM a girl... xD
But awesome chapter man! :)
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