Reviews for The Last Dance
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Some of the action scenes are a bit...wordy and it's supposed to be twenty-two, not 22. But minor gripes aside, I admit, you have a way with words and I think this is a pretty decent piece overall. Keep writing
Trades46 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Some minor grammatical errors, but well written overall. I loved each explanation and also the integration of Garuda team alongside the AWACS radio traffic straight from Mission 1. Felt just like the game.
Daisuke Tokayuma chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
You never do see what he sees in the campaign so I think you did good in showing what he would've been thinking. I almost cried when he died you developed his character that good based on little things the game gives you. Good job.
Cold secrets chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
full of feels
nice one shot bro
admljmc8492 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
wow... this was pretty darn good. extremly minor mistakes but all in all a good fast paced story. i could hear in my head the voices of the pilots. 4.5 guardian angels out of 5. keep writing