|Reviews for A Kitsune in Nerima|
| redwolf23456 chapter 4 . 4/25
Great story so far
| darkponyD chapter 4 . 4/13
Nice, nice. Please update soon!
| Brothii chapter 4 . 2/6
nice story hope you continue to add to it
| KrisB-71854 chapter 4 . 11/28/2014
This is a good Ranma/Kasumi fic. I'm sort of iffy on just how much of Ranma's future skills that you've released to him at any given moment.
Ranma had awesome level MA to start with. Your first time line gave him ultra level MA which is fine, but his wish basically was that he brought all of those skills with him. They weren't really supposed to be locked away.
Re-earned or worked for a bit, sure, but with all of that in his memory some where, he'd be using it as a base to get to even more awesome levels.
I actually like how this is going over all. I don't actually want Ranma to be teleported back into Naruto verse though. So far, I've enjoyed him living a better life this time around.
I don't think he needed the mystical hit squad on him yet. Hell, if they put up with Ryouga and the Amazons the first time around, why the heck would they care about Ranma actually ending it that plot thread/character chain before it starts? O.k. I can see the government slightly worried about him, but at this time there isn't anything official that he is anything other than cursed and an upper tier MA.
He was involved in destroying two mountains last time around. I'd have figured that they would have been far more worried about him being engaged by Akane last time and her driving him over the edge. Some one shouting out, I'm going to kill you Die! Isn't some one you need to hold back on. Oddly, in the US in most states, Ranma would have been perfectly fine if he shot the guy to death "in fear of his life." Ryouga's statements pretty much damned him.
I like the Kasumi/Ranma slice of life stuff. I actually want to see them spar and just hang out. They rode that motorcycle to the temple? I can see male bonding with the guy chatting while the girls all go squee with Kasumi and everything.
Oddly, if you are going to make the Kyubi a AMG style demon or such instead of just a kitsune, he'd need a god(dess) partner. If Kasumi ever gets a wish or something similar, I'd want it to come at a time that they were actually really sure about staying together and wishing something along the lines of having a matching life span / form as Ranma so that they could properly live a long life together.
Something like that would ensure that she'd get taken along if they left that world. I'd actually love it if they both got "promoted" and bonded like that.
Something fun to think about. You could have Kasumi teach Bell-chan her MA style.
| fellow chapter 4 . 11/10/2014
| god of all chapter 4 . 8/31/2014
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon..
| ranma hibiki chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
"oh look, an update". you leave off with a cliff hanger like this an I'm left attempting to click for the next chapter that's not here yet!
well done! ;3
keep up the good work!
| deathgeonous chapter 3 . 7/10/2014
Ah, such fun. I am missing this. Ah well, thanks for writing this and goodbye for now.
| ruby2360 chapter 4 . 6/22/2014
quite sweet chapter
| killersoda57 chapter 4 . 6/3/2014
Great story so far i hope to see more soon.
| Master Dakari-Venomon chapter 4 . 5/18/2014
If you have the timeeven for a small chapter we would apprecate it!,, dont let this story die!
| RCPMione chapter 4 . 5/8/2014
well this will be an interesting meeting!
| andres.mullerbeck chapter 4 . 4/8/2014
awesome story, looking forward to more
| Preier chapter 4 . 4/7/2014
a bit too much powerfull for ranma, but who cares. love the "guest-stars"
thanks for sharing your stories
| Ibskib chapter 3 . 4/2/2014
nice omake, Sayuri is pretty amusing in small doses, for anything more, her lisp starts to annoy me.
calculative look - calculating look
depression conclusion - depressing conclusion
Pops in twist now wouldn't it - Pops's knickers in a twist now wouldn't it